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by mannahpierce

person eunmook
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is giggly goof Shikamaru's new love? Just a thought...
person roro237
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Five is something else:) I didn't get a feel for what his decision will be. So I'm waiting to see what he decides. The giggling Uchiha huh?! I can't wait to fine out who that might be:) This was another wonderful day spend with the Clan ^_^
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Haru on this one, I don't know if I believe that Haru will always be Ran's best friend. Maybe his first but they are at different stages and I know in the last novel Ran promised not to leave Haru behind, but he has no choice. Sometimes friends just drift apart

ja ne till next time
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i wondered if/when Madara would make an appearance... if that is madara. I'm glad sas has his kids as the top priority. They need to be since they're the future. haru may not realise it yet, but he's just assured his name will be remembered long after he's gone. that's some legacy to leave behind. hmmmm, i wonder who Five has his eye on.
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haru is finding his nitch (sp?) in this chapter, at first when he told Shika that he had found the solution I thought Sai had helped him. But if he did it himself that is truly amazing. I love Haru. I really can't wait to find out who is in that pod!!!

ja ne till next time
person Dawn
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I should get excited for good things to come or if I should get sick to my stomach just imagining what might come......... ugggghhhh!!! But as always LOVED IT!!!!! :) till next time
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man this is exciting!!! I can't wait till the mysterious Uchiha's identity is revealed. Why was he put into stasis, did he go crazy after the death of his lover? Just trying to figure out who he belonged to, since he has a band on his love finger. Thought it was Madara till that last paragraph. Uh, then Five wanting to be a lover to an Uchiha, I wonder who he has his eyes set on. I've been trying to restrict my reading so I can build up my chapters.

ja ne till Saturday and keep up the awesomesauce
person richon
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ran is gonna be a trainee, haru will be alone !! he will find a way to make connections !! love your story !!
person haru
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hoho yes haru you did a great thing !! you change the way to find routes !! you may be not a type seven genius but you are amazing !! love this story , see you soon with more to know who is in the pot !!
person Dawn
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WHOOT WHOOT HARU!!!!!!!! LOL I knew he was SMART!!!!!!! Wonderful wonderful chapter. sorry I didn't review the last chapter.. I was a bit behind!! But I am loving it!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!