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damn, haru is one special little kid. i wonder if Sai helped. now though, he'll need something else to distract him from his most understanding friend moving on. Shika and Haru are lucky to have the support network they do.

I'm still sitting in amazement at all the detail you've put into this world you've created. The scientific portions blow my mind and make me think of all the hard work you've done to bring us all of this and I have to say thank you. I may not review every chapter, but I'm always reading.

This was... incredible. I have nothing more to say. Haru is so great... I'm speachles... This chapter was great. It made me wonder if Haru is really typed5.....
What is the characteristic of type 6 geniuses?
Was Kotetsu type 6???? Or maybe Haru is something more than Shika, like type 8...? Is there even anything like that?
He is still VERY young. It's hard to tell how hismind will develope... or 'into WHAT'..

so good to have them back!! i love reading about the children and how they are maturing. will there soon be more with haku, itachi and kisame

Awesome as always. Haru dancing in underpants! Whoot! I totally get what Shikamaru means about wanting to stroke that fur coz that was pretty much my first thought when I read your description of Five in chapter Five (was that intentional?)oh yeah, pretty pretty kitty boy! Excuse my ignorance, since I know diddly squat about any Naruto universe but yours, is Five an OC? Also, I really hope you're not working your way towards making Shikamaru dispensable... begging your pardon for my overactive and somewhat morbid imagination. Man, if only you knew how many times I reread this tale in between updates!

Oh this chapter warmed my heart:) I'm proud of Haru to! I wonder is Haru a type 5 6 or 7 genius? But right now he's just a little man wanting his Papa to be proud of him. I got that from the dance in his underwear:) I loved it! I have to admit that I was afraid that someone might challenge Papa like the last time. I was breathing a little easier when it was over ^_^

I love it when our heroes talk (make-believe) science. And who is the blast from the past in the pod? Is he or she good, evil, or like many of your characters, redeemable? Someone's life's love? A threat to Sasuke's leadership? A great scientist?

As nice as it is to give Haru this special moment of greatness I'm lost in the math thinking stuff. I like human interaction better :-) I hope for a lot cuteness in the next chapters

Five will be a big chalenge vor the children. I hope the kids will not go berserk on him.
Poor Haru is afraid of loosing his friend :-(

poor haru. everything is changing so fast. he had four people who really got him, one of those is now dead, another is so busy with other duties and family that he can't spend time openly with him, ones artificial and can't be acknowledged openly and now the last of them leaving him for full time training. leaving him behind. he knows it's what ran needs but it's hard, hard, hard, knowing that person isn't going to be there as wanted/needed anymore. He's trying so hard not to be selfish, but what about his support net work. Being a Typed Genius won't he need more of one than he has?
hopefully, he'll be able to adapt to the changes... but haru doesn't sound very optimistic does he. being left behind is no fun at all.