rate_review Reviews

The arriving to the Heaven was very exciting! I liked the part where kids recited what they knew of the past events from other parts of the story. It was nice to bask in those recollections for a minute!
There was a lot about kids in this one. I hope there will be more of the grown ups, I mean like more about Naruto, Sasuke and Shika than about To-chan, Papa and Shi-chan. I miss it a bit.

WOW!!!! Great chapter. Poor Haru. I like that this chapter was done in Haru's point of view. I really like him as a character. I can't wait to findout what is in the pod. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS <3

Man, I've literally been jumping in place all day in between checking my mailbox repeatedly. Doesn't help that I'm in India, and so my wednesdays and sundays begin way before yours do. Is it too greedy to ask for more, hopeful, hungry orphan style?

great chapter, sad with the kids growing up and moving on.

You had a hole lot of people in your compute room again:) WoW! That was great!! Ran and Five huh? I'm like Haru I'm happy for Ran and sad that he's growing up already. I loved it sweet and sad at the same time ^_^

shika had a good day he has friends who love him. Love the part where kakashi say neji know he is not the one for shika. Neji is awesing, i don't know if i could do the same things. haru don't want somebody to discover sai. love your story see you soon

I must say I felt kind of glad that Shikamaru talked about Neji with Kakashi. It was likea small hope for a new romantic relationship for Shikamaru or/and Neji. Their relationship works but it's a bit boring or... colorless... I don't know, maybe it's just the way Neji is, and it's ok but baybe... just maybe you plan something interestingg for Shika....

The other thought I've been having for a long time is that Shika would be good for Sasuke when Naruto will be no loger there... But I don't like to think about those things for obvious reasons.

I'm also glad that Shika (even if just accidentaly) found Naruto. I hope he will get a hug. I wonder if Shika worries his head about Naruto's short lifespan...

What else? Thanks for a moment with Iruka! He was great with the punishment and with knowing the kids' schedule...

Thanks for the update!

Is Tsuneo going to be the next heart of things... I can feel that little bit of extra special love for him like there is for Haru. Do you realize that Hikaru and all the female children apart from Hoshi aren't quite as likeable (liked?) as the rest of them? Does that actually make Hikaru the girliest of the first lot?

i love the way they rally round to manage and look after him. shika needs it right now, very much.
what would his little sis have done if she was still with her ma and pa? would they have arranged things like play dates to keep her from being lonely? I hope she doesn't get angsty over having to share sai.

Am I the only one seeing a little blonde clone with a soft spot for Shika? Maybe he can have the spot a certain Teme has taken with the original. In the future of course. I so like to pair up people. And Sai is getting some action thats nice too :-)