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(ch 4) I adore your Shika. Who is his soul mate? What'sin the pod?

I do so love Tsu-chan:) I hadn't realize that poor Shika was still grieving. I would say Shikamaru is the most complicated charter you have. And you do an amazing job with him:) I enjoyed the day with him. Thank goodness little sister is improving. Shika found his way to the best place. In To-chan company:) I love the title it was night and day ^_^

OHHHHHHH Poor Shika!!! Naruto just needs to hug him and be done!! :) More Sia?? YAY!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Loved it!

loved the insight into shikamaru. He is a deeper character then one might first think. Love the story overall, thank you for the hard work.

who is in their ?? you can't stop at this moment!! it will be ifficult to wait until saturday but I will manage !! see you soon, this saga is awesome

interesting, and far more hopeful than the first two chappies. It gives a hint of sas being able to retire after naru is gone rather than trying to cope with Uchiah responsibilities while he grieves. since this is new uchiah i sincerely hope he takes that option, cause i doubt he'll cope well with naru gone.
anywho, looking forward to finding out whose in storage.
i wonder if young Negato while bond with Tsueno like the straight triplets have with their chosen pack members and will the rest of the pack members find someone to bond with like that.

Loved chapters 2 and 3. Waiting for the answer in chapter 4. Thanks again for a great story!

Thank you for Leader. Already into the 3rd chapter and here comes intrigue. Has me wondering who could be in the pod and what type of problems they'll bring with them.

Oh boy! Way to wipe everything else from my mind. And here I was going to be all "please slow down if you feel you must, but write a world you enjoy creating." But with that cliffhanger I'm all "please speed up I can't wait till sunday!" instead. Sometimes a plot itself is so intricate or exciting that one can't wait to get from one point to another, in the reading as well as the writing. For me it is your characters that make the story: your world comes alive because of the people who people it, so please take your time playing with them just like you always have. From personal experience, the one thing I know to hold repeatedly true, is that if you write with one eye constantly on the end, you end up tripping before you're anywhere near it. And this is a story I wish to enjoy reading for a looooong loooooong time to come, so I hope you find it in you to wish to write it for a loooooong looong time to come.

Yes! Thank you for the smutty parts! I hope to see some of growling-possessive-Naruto and very satisfied Sasuke too!

This perfectly happy picture was a bit scarry. Like a calm before the storm...
I wonder what's comming to us in this mysterious vessel? Little Hikaru from the past in his pod after kidnaping...? Just kidding!
I'll see at Saturday!

Thnk you for the new chapter!