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by mannahpierce

person Dawn
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GASP!!!!!!!!!! Who is in the POD????? IS it a trap...... I can't wait to find out!! :) Thank You Loved it!! MUAH!
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor Naru-chan can't keep his Sasuke in bed after sex. So cute. But who might be sleeping in the pod?! I don't know if I realy want to know.
person roro237
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I knew if Kakashi called it was important. But wOw!! Who is it? Where did they come from? What happen to them? How long have they been out in space? I'm sounding like a news reported:) This will be my favorite chapter because? Ooh you know already:) Yes the fluffy soft stuff I love it!!! You touched on all my happy spots in this chapter. Tsu-chan is to adorable for words. Nagato-chan hanging on to Papas leg then saying Tusneo is what he likes best was the sweetest thing:) Plus I noticed that Tusneo was tending to his tomato plants which happen to be Papas favorite. He's Papas little man alright:) I just loved spending the day with Papa. This was wonderful!
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE BACK!! :-)It started well but I could live with a bit less Haru-perspective.
person angelj232000
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sumiko is still anoying. I hope Haru can help Shikamaru. I am not sure of Sai any more. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS <3 !!!!!!!
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is Haru being groomed to be the leader??? Or is the plan still that whoever wants to take over takes over?? Will Sai ever be introduced to the family?? I just have so many questions and I can't remember them all. I really liked this chapter, felt kinda bad for Sai cause Sumiko no longer needs him. I liked that everyone got to meet the Ninken crew. I could just see all of Kakashi's dogs in humanoid for and your description of them was cool.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person Dawn
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter...as always.. The move to the oak should be interesting eh? LOL I got a feeling something BIG is gonna happen? NO? LOL Can't wait to read more!!! <3 it!!!
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness!!! I'm so excited about Leader as well as sad because you've stated that this will be the last mass arc of the storyline.
I'm so happy that I read chapters one and two back to back because the opening chapter had me crying my eyes out! Only you could start a story jerking my heartstrings... But I can't wait to see all the amazing things to come!
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
completely false and made him want to hit her. i had to laugh at this.
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I finally found a minute to read it. Good chapter. I like this atmosphere of upcomming change. They move to the Oak and I can't wait to see what that will bring.
Naruto should do something nice for Shika to cheer him up. Only he can do it, only he could wake him from the coma and... I think it's just HIS part to do.
It's still kind of weir for me that eleven year old kid thinks about 'sharing hi body' with another boy but i liiked that he thought that about Kazuki. I like him. He's a hybrid, he's got a tail, he's smaller than the rest, there's a big probability that he's a berserker (I guess... since he seems to have more animal-genes than the rest)and still he's so... cheerful and optimistic... like Naruto.
I hope he's got some bigger part in this story.
Can't wait for Wednesday!
THANK YOU for the update.