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by mannahpierce

schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 101. Yukie has guts. She's real quick with getting things set up for the long run. Poor Shikamaru. I didn't expect Yukie to be the wild card that will push Sasuke and the rest of the clan to follow through with sorting out if Izuna is Madara or not.

Chapter 102. Things are falling into play! Will Madara regret his haste in removing the print? I can't wait for the surprise I can taste it! When crap hits the fan, I wonder who will be cleaning it up.

Keep up the awesome writing! I can't wait to read what will happen!
person Rose Moon
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I have read all of this series and your other works as well. They are all amazing, please keep contributing the results of your amazing writing skills to the world.
person melissen
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
W-what?....only five more? And then what? Life won’t be the same without this being updated every week…..
Another amazing chapter. Why does the story have to end while it’s getting even better? On the other hand I am really anticipating the end. It is something we all waited from to begin with after all…
I hope one day you’ll feel like getting back to it and fill in the blanks. Maybe you’ll present to us how Kakashi and Iruka had met or Itachi and Kisame’s story…
It’s hard to thing about this story ending…. It is good (in a way) but scary. I remember how I had to wait for the Leader… it was tough. I stopped reading Naruto’s ff altogether at some point but this – never!
Once again huge THANK YOU for giving away so much of your time to write it, to share it with us. I know the pain of reposting and fixing things when every chapter on AFF turned in to the wall of text. But you never gave up. You never failed to update at least once a week, and mostly it was still twice a week! You are amazing writer and person.
person sadie237
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SQ! The only reason I'm not crying about 5 left is you have something new on the horizon:) But still I'm a little teary eyed:) It's like my family is moving away to another state. OMG they are so close to fining out! Please let the test come back a reveling the truth!! To-chan is on his way out of the tank!!!(Yea Baby) This chapter is the 'source' of some apprehension for me:) It's like a cliffy! And I loved it all. I'm looking forward to the next episode ^_^
person Moonmoore
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You really are amazing. You always surprise me and leave me hooked. I so want to have Naruto up and running. I miss him in the story and his special way of seeing things. He is an amazing character. I am sad to hear the story has almost run its course. I could continue reading forever and probably will continue to re-read all the saga for much time to come. Thanks for the wonderful stories and the awesome world you have created for us. I hope once this one is over you'll find yourself in the mood to write us oneshots to add to the saga.

Sincerely


Moonmoore
person SidonieStarr
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't had anything to say recently - I'm still an avid follower. It's interesting that Yukie Fujikaze, rather than one of the preternaturally talented and resourceful Uchiha crew, is the one to deduce Madara's identity.

For now, much suspense remains. Will Madara make a move before Naruto wakes up? Where is Haru and what's with that plant - a deus ex machina or a red herring? And will you feel compelled to decimate Uchiha like you did when you killed off Shikamaru's parents?
person satterb
schedule August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so infuriated that Madara was able to have the Orochimaru print killed. But I guess that might have made it too easy. I'm just hoping and praying that Madara does indeed get caught, and I hope you're able to publicly humiliate him before it's over. I think having the world find out what a fraud he is would be worse to him than death. I especially love it that he thinks of himself as such a ladies man, when really all he does is turn them off. As always, I'm in for the ride till the very end. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH IM FLAILING! I CANT BELIEVE IT YUKIE-SAN CAME THROUGH OMG
person eunmook
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AH HA!!!! trumpets and clarinets of 'the truth finally dawns'!!! And you are back with a bang! I wish my slumps gave me such energy!
person Moonmoore
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great Work in the lasts chapters. They are awesome! Thanks for all your hard work. I love what you've done and waiting for Naruto to wake up and bring Sasuke to heel. lol!

Sincerely


Moonmoore