schedule
April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'd forgotten how much I love your writing! <3333333~
I can't wait to see your overall plot for this one, but I also love the little details too.
;A;
Also hnnnngggg last one noooo D8
I can't wait to see your overall plot for this one, but I also love the little details too.
;A;
Also hnnnngggg last one noooo D8
schedule
April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the ningen crew !! they are awesome. the household will space, what will happen then who will they meet ?? love this story, see you soon !!
schedule
April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved my outing with the family:) My favorite part in this chapter was the knives and salute. The sound of all forty and more knives being scabbard. I could picture it and hear it. That was awesome! Papa talking in his special voice. Kiba is still the greatest nanny in all space. The litter has grown so much Ka-chan reminded me of Naruto when he was younger teasing Haru about his hair:) Oh Queenie I enjoyed every part! The title was great and so fitting ^_^
schedule
April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first, let me say, welcome back.
that done, wow. it's scary to think of Sas without Naru... i mean sure he'll have others around him to support him but in that brief time naru was off line, sas was a wreck. he was very much like queen victoria without her husband. I don't know how long he would cope before he crashed.
i think Klenn would have left quite a bit scattered here and there. i wonder what he would have passed to sai and haru.
i'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
that done, wow. it's scary to think of Sas without Naru... i mean sure he'll have others around him to support him but in that brief time naru was off line, sas was a wreck. he was very much like queen victoria without her husband. I don't know how long he would cope before he crashed.
i think Klenn would have left quite a bit scattered here and there. i wonder what he would have passed to sai and haru.
i'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
schedule
April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks you for sharing with us this beautiful trilogy! It is a sad start but it totally fit with the story development. Like others had said, between OC characters Klenn san had leave without a doubt the deepest impression. He is and will ever be the most charming, tricky, sly as a fox, and beloved genius.
Thanks you for the hard work. Your stories have fill may days with happiness!
Thanks you for the hard work. Your stories have fill may days with happiness!
schedule
April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's about time I jumped on the band wagon. Oh how I've missed you. I almost thought Naruto was the one that died, then I continued reading. I also want to know how Sasuke will act once Naruto is gone, will he resign or persevere? Poor Shika and Haru, I wonder what all Klenn left them. Only time will tell. Oh gosh I'm just so happy that you updated, even though this will be the last mini novella, lol. Jeez I love this story, I'm going to try and read it slow. *probably not going to work*
ja ne till next time and see ya Saturday
ja ne till next time and see ya Saturday
schedule
April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad that it gives me shivers down my spine. I always knew that Klenn's time is limited but actually reading this chapter? It literally gave me shivers as I'm writing this review. It's like saying good bye to a dear dear friend. Klenn is actually one of my favourite characters of your novel and I'm sad to see him go. Nonetheless I felt you did a wonderful job of giving him the send off he deserves. *hugs*
schedule
April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely. Deathbed, huh? Seems a logical choice of beginning for a learning to grow story. A lot moodier and broodier, what with all the foreshadowing of everyone's future loneliness, as well as the emphasis on the isolation (self-imposed or otherwise) of each of the characters you picked to feature in your first chapter. It's a great beginning, can't wait for more. More RanxHaru please!
schedule
April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to be reading your fic again. I am however sad to hear that this will be the last one. I loved this chapter. It was sad but important for Shikamaru and for Haru. I like that Sasuke let Haru go but sent Naruto with him. I laughed at Neji when Naruto said that the two of them would stay there and not go with Shikamaru and Haru. Keep up the awesome work!!!!! HUGS <3!!!!!!
schedule
April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shika and Haru! :(
Warm welcome back Mannah san!
Warm welcome back Mannah san!