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I threw up my hands in victory when I realized the epilogue was sex! Ha ha! Naruto took his name. How wonderful! *fangirl squeal* I so thoroughly enjoyed that! I’m sad it over. I will have to reread it now. I loved the fact you made Negato Kushnia's brother. ^_^
btw, I've got an idea for story, but I'm not very good at mysteries, might you be interested in a collaboration? misatospenpen at gmail dot com

Holy. Shit. That was amazing. I loved this sooo much!
And I wanted to let you know that while I read this, I could clearly see everything in my head.
It's like watching a movie! <3

Thanks for writing a good story. I enjoyed it all the way til the end.

Jonesing for the next chapter! Sorry, I'm just impatient. ^_^

AHHHHH! No, that was great! I do wish Itachi and Kisame had a little bit more of confrontation, tussle or somehting, but I love Deidera's explosion, yeah. Now you've got reunite out little lovers! Oh, speaking of which, I love the litte kiss between Itachi Deidera. ^_^ And of course, the immortal Hidan. I'd forgotten about Zetzu. I knew the reason Konan was working with Madara had to be because of Negato and/or Yahiko. I'm expecting a good sex scene to make up for the repeated heart attacks!
btw, yeah, all the speech tags since have been good. Remember, your method is faster than the one I suggested. Yeah, mine is the real way, but yours is better.

The cell phone tower thing was just an observation, honestly, trying to get the cell phone company to help usually takes about a day. Your way is faster, so keep it. And believe me, I HATE speech tags. I've had a long, passionate, long standing debate with a fellow author about them. You just need to make sure the reader knows who's talking. I did a two page dialog scene with only like three speech tags and got HAMMERED, so I feel you.
You know, Madara should have taken a picture of Sasuke with a gunshot wound on the ground to taunt Naruto with; that would have helped break him.
Ahhhhh, the end of another chapter! I like this plan! I hope it works . . .

Oh my lord, when Tsunade hit the ground my hand flew to my mouth. That scene will forever stick into my mind, I loved it! I feel sorry for Naruto and I hope that everyone will be alight in the end. Great chapter and I can't wait until the next one comes out.

So Itachi lives, Deidara saves him, Kisame is a crap head and Naruto took a swing at the killer. Holy crap there is a lot of different stuff going on in this chapter! I loved it, and I had to skip some of my homework in order to read this all the way through. I couldn't stop, I had to finish. It just keeps on getting better and better and I cannot wait till the next chapter. I think that your writing style has very much improved and it is amazing. Your chapters are getting longer and even more detailed. I wonder how this will turn out, will they all win, or will there be losses? It seems to be spiraling down?

*Squeal!!!!!!!!*
No, I never calmed down! I've been checking every hour for updates! Ahhhhh!

WooHoo!!! Itachi's alive! (I've only read the first sentance.)
Itachi was texting Dederia. Awwww...
btw, the cops can find out what towers were used for certain calls and could have found Naruto's general location that way too. ^_^ I've been a fan of Forensic Files since the start, I never watch that CSI crap. ^_^
Whoa. That crazy mother f**ker (Madara). I soooo didn't see that coming.
Okay, time out for editing: in the hospital waiting room, you really need to say who's talking and I'm like, 'why the hell are Kiba, Neji, and Kakahsi in same place right now?'
Oh, so that was what Itachi's been doing! And Orochimaru was Kabuto's lawyer! Yay! Go Itachi! I knew you were sweet. I love you, my percious Itachi.
I'm just imagining Sasuke hitting that morphine button a bunch of times then throwing it and muttering "fuck!" and it makes me laugh.
Ah, fuck. The end. I hate you. I hope my readers feel like this after every chapter. You make me really regret making them wait so long for updates. This is karma, isn't it? You are my readers revenge. I hope it's Kakashi who comes to save the day.

NO!!!! FU Kisame!!!! Good god I hate that he's a bad guy, and what DID ITACHI DO???? I am still trying to figure out how Itachi and Naruto are connected but I can't figure it out!!!! No, please don't let Sasuke die, please, please, please don't let him die! I can't believe they got married!!! It seemed a little rushed but hey that's how things are. I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Angel_Davis