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I'm once again reviewing as I'm reading.
This guy, he could just as well be one of Tsunade's as one of Madara's. hmmm. Red Herring? ... okay, not Tsunade's. Poor Neji and Kakashi.
AHHHH!!! Itachi's own crimes!!! Is it what he did to Naruto? Or is it about his parents?!
I'm reminded of Rogue Squadron (the Star Wars book) when Erisi comes onto Corrin and Corrin's like, no, you want to have sex because we were just in a very dangerous situation and it's just an emotional reaction to it. ^_^ Oh, shit. I hope they stop before they get too far.
Oh, thank god, that would have been bad.
WooHoo! The prolouge will be soon! This is so exciting!
OH FUCK! Itachi better not be dead!!!!!
Ah, that boom in the prolouge didn't make sense, but now it does, the fireworks.
AHHHHH!!!! Bad Phoenix!!!!! The is the mother of all cliff hangers!!!! I'm so railed up!!!! Is Itachi okay?!?!?!?! How is Sasuke going to survive? What was the reason behind all this? Who is that woman and what does she want? Ahhhhh!!!!!!
I need a drink.

I'm reviewing as I'm reading.
It's great, every time I see this story updated, I'm happy! I think Itachi's taking percautions . . . Sasuke's got Naruto taken care of, now Itachi wants to the same for Sasuke.
I like the Naruto first person POV now that they're seperated.
I never thought of Madara! But that would be the same as Tobi.
Naruto's going to run away, isn't he?
Oh, at least he wasn't going to try and solve it all on his own.
I get the feeling, Sasuke's about to get shot.
Thinking about Akatsuki and the person Itachi texted, I can't help think about canon and wonder if Itachi's somehow in with Akastuki.

Thanks for the good story. Can't wait for the ending.

So, my theories were: Orochimaru, Tobi, and Danzou. I sort of thought it could be Sai in some weird trying to finish what someone else started kind of thing, because he's acting weird. So it's probably Danzou. But for the love of God don't even hint whether or not I'm right!!!!!
But when the murderer threatened that biker, for a moment I thought "Could it actually be Itachi?!" That momentary protectivness of his targets felt like Itachi-Protectivness. But he was in the courtroom with Orochimaru and Kisame would be with him.
I thought the woman was poisoned. My bad.
Ooooo, waiting for the Itachi story! And who did Itachi text?! The second man, was it Sai or the man Sasuke just met with? (don't answer that!)
Inwardly screaming with anticipation!!!!

*Spasming out* So it can’t be Orochimaru since our mystery man was in the hotel room since he snatched the photo and Orochimaru was visiting the station. So I have two suspicions, but I think we all know who he is. Right?
And who was the woman?! First thought: Konan. And did she have to do with this? So many questions!
When you started that one section with “His target was in sight as the shadow walked swiftly down the bustling street” I feared you’d jumped to Sasuke’s encounter with the killer at the beginning! Oh, I’m getting anxious.
And we’re going to find out what Itachi did in the next chapter? *happy dance*

Hey. I really like your story. Please update soon. Um, I'm new and Idk how to work this stuff, so could you tell me how to add your story? Thanks.

A few chapters later? That means it's that long? YAY!!!!!! And I'm happy to help when it's a story that I'm enjoying so much.
A Councilman who liked to run things from the shadows?! Oh, you devious little thing. I knew you were going to throw a wrench in my suspicions! So I now have three suspects in my mind. Lovely! I sit in movie threaters bored because I'm able to jump ahead of the screenwriter and director, but you keep susprising me! Throurghly enjoyable!
And the Ice Prince is crying! Ohhhh....
I'm sooo looking forward to more.

I just finished it and I have to say this was amazing! I laughed so many times at Sasuke's attitude with his two babysitters, and how dickish they both were toward the couple. I was sad at the fact that Sasuke crying, but when Naruto came in I was like, awwww, thats so sweet! Then Haku died and I was like NUUUUUUU you can't end it there! Wow, cannot wait till I get to read the next chapter. Great work!

1) POV again in the first part; I think you just missed a page break.
2) This chapter confused me. So Kabuto was the one who nearly raped Naruto, right? So what did Itachi do? Now you've got me all on edge to find out what Itachi did!

Poor Sasuke, sure he's about to die. And he will be shot!!! I hope it will be Itachi or Kakashi to his rescue. Ahhh!!!! You're killing by inches with suspense!

This is amazing! I love this story so much and I can't wait till you update. I really hate the situation that Naruto and Sasuke are in right now mainly because I just want them to be together, not separated, but that's just the fan girl in me talking. I am excited to see who the hell the killer is, and if more of the Akatsuki will show up. YOU HAVE KISAME IN THIS!!!!! SQUEEEE! Sorry, over hyper fan girl again... he he