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If you want to do something kinky with the control that naruto has over the girls bodys; while having sex, he could forbid the girls to cum, and their bodys would have to comply. Both the amount of cum and amount of need for release could keep building up in their body's, for eternity in threory, and the hypersenitive amount of pleasure, pressure, and need to cum could drive the women mad. And their bodys could not cum, without his say so. Of course naruto would only do that if the women gave permission, but it would be possible. It is just an idea. However if that idea would cause pain not pleasure, than forget about the idea.

Very nice chapters, read everything after Kaji's defeat and enjoyed it. I can't wait to see how you get the people in the past arcs though.

thank you so much for updating

So glad your back.

Thank you very much for keeping up with this, even after Yff went under. I thought to myself then: would I be inclined to keep posting after multiple story-deletion? No definite answer. So I promised myself to at least cheer you on if You continued, and so here we are. Btw did you have to re-format the chapters for this site to work? I never reviewed on this site till now, I wonder which chapter it'll show up on...
Anyway, keep going strong! Later!

Excellent chapter LS! I've been following this story since the beginning before the pricks at FF cut you off and YourFF decided to take their own life while no one was watching. I hope AdultFF stays alive. Can't wait for the next Chapter!

Great to see this being continued even after YourFanFiction shut down, even if it's only an update to how far the story was on that website. Looking forward to more!

Thanks lemon sage now add your ero ninja's kunoichi story in this site please

Hello again! On this chapter, I must say that I find the pragmatic approach many of the harem members taking do wonders for advancing their ambition, and I feel this is a result of their lynchpin setting such a good example. I am glad to see that the rift between Kumo and Konoha has started healing, as while there will still be resentment and detractors, having the Raikage believe, or at least grateful, is a fine place to start. I must apologize for not reviewing the prior chapters, as I was rather eager to read the next. But at the end of the line (for now) I find it prudent to once more offer my most sincere thanks for writing such a wondrous story. Farewell my fine fellow.

Sweet! It's great to see you update all your chapters here. I can't wait to see more, whether here or where ever else you put it. I jsut hope that what other site you might use doesn't require me to sign up. *nods*

keep up the good work!