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Great update. I am looking forward to more targets. When yourfanfiction went down I was worried about this story, but it seems like you are taking care of everything.

It's a really good story when will the rest of the chapters be uploaded, because Yourfanfiction is gone, I am really bored. Please update.

Your story in on your fanfiction is gone :/ I was wondering are u gonna update this story to where u were currently at in your fanfiction I love it if u do ! I'm a big fan !! Plzzz and thank u !

I think you might need to start posting the chapters you had already written over here man. Looks like yourfanfiction tanked. I haven't been able to get access to the site for a couple weeks now. Either that or my computer is just messed up.

So is this going to be the main site for updates now or is this still the backup and you're going to start posting somewhere else? Either way please update this soon. I loved chapters 30 and 33 but now I have nowhere to read them. Plus I can't wait to see what happens with Pakura.

dude update

well since yourfanficiton is down he needs continue here, the story is very good

Are ever gonna update this?

i really love your story man listen i don't know if you know this or not but i think yourfanfiction.com has been taken down the last chapter of your fantastic story was chapter 30 and you had 4 more chapters up on yourfanfiction for use fans to read could you please upload the nessary chapters on to this site (adult fanfiction.net so that me and your other fans may be abe to further enjoy your story man thanks i really love your story and i honestly question why no one has thought of it before and why fanfiction.net is being such asssholes to use writers nad readers. please update thissite with your story soon man thanks if you can't update it on this site could you just email me the chapters of the story that i have not read yet thanks man peace and love shadespace(fanfiction account name)/jordan lopez

I also wrote this in fanfiction.net. I really love your story so it would break my heart to see it stop. I have a backup of this story which contains the first chapter until to Chapter 33: Mabui. If you are interested in it please pm me in fanfiction.net or email me at hotcold_36@yahoo.com