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for Eroninja

by TheLemonSage

person Akuma-Heika
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fan of your story on FF got taken down sometime in the last 24 hours though. Your lagging a bit on the updates here. Hope to see this get caught up!
person Bilgun
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FF com flaming my computer id good luck written so for this faction
person Killjoy92
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this is the best naruto fanfic i have read so far involving naruto and a harem most others that I have read would start off great but then stop and would never get finished. So i am asking no more like begging please finish this story for it is a true work of literary art. All that i wish is for you to continue to write this fanfic. So please from the bottom of my heart keep writing.

Signed,
Killjoy92
person Spyash2
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see Guren targeted. Could you do her sometime in the future?
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes great story i can not wait to read the next chapter keep up the good work.
person jupmod
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read all the chapters, and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this Naruto Harem fic. An unique way for Naruto to gain a harem in his quest to bring peace to the world. :)

With that said, I'm looking forward to the next arc, especially when Naruto start seducing the Kumo girls. I like that he would seduce Mabui and Samui. :)

Oh... Maybe it would be best Naruto does not seduce every girl in the entire series. Say keep that redheaded Kumo kunoichi out, given she has no roles to play in Naruto's Alliance.

Anyway, I await the next chapter when it comes out. :)
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An awesome story thus far. I don't say that easily either. A few minor spelling/grammar errors here and there, but nothing that really takes away from the story or makes me scratch my head saying "What are they talking about?"
person ebm6969
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Its great to see your work here but can I ask why your putting the unimportant girls from the Naruto verse in the story? Why not just skip them and go to the important girls from a different verse? I was thinking of making Rangiku Matsumoto into the female version of Yonbi if you can considered into taking my suggestion of it I'll be extremely grateful if you did.
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

U are one heck of a writer. i love ur story. this is really epic and i cant wait to read more from you. I was wondering if you are taking requests as well because i would love it if ur able to write the story i want to read. please let me know if u can do that for me. i would really appreciate it.

keep up the good work
person Kage
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope you don't get deleted of the other site.