rate_review Reviews

A couple of things I wish were different about this story, one of which is that the characters are all 18 years old or older.

Here's hoping that this story's still going, hope you get your muse.

Although you tend to drag out the drama, you have created a very interesting (and sexy) version of the Narutoverse!

Thank you for your time and effort, I'm looking forward to new chapters.

Although most of your story is great, once you started introduced drama (which probably made sense in your demented brain) you began ruining the story. Stick to writing lemons and do not allow the bad guys more than a sentence of screen time before killing them in the most horrific way possible. For example, five paragraphs of lemon, one sentence of introducing bad guy of the chapter, two paragraphs of his/her/it's horrible death then onto another twenty paragraphs of lemon.

Unless of course your ambition happens to be suicide by fan, in which case your meeting your mark admirably!

Sin-surely,

Death2Drama

P.S. Stick close to your nickname oh Kami no Lemon

You suck, the only way you can combat your suckiness is stopping your piss poor attempt at drama!

Great story. Excited for the second Mito chapter. I really hope Naruto and Anko reconsile. It would be too sad to have them drift away.

i really have enjoyed the story a lot so thanks so much for the great read. im hopping that things work out for anko and naruto ive always been a huge fan of anko. once love the the story keep up the epic awesome work

Hoho, things are going to get ugly now, while in canon Nagato brought everybody back to life, now nearly half of Konoha is dead. Everybody will be out for blood, and the other nations will definitely try their luck now Konoha's military strength has been halved if not more. I'm curious to see what Sage's role in the story will be now, and if Shukaku will be returned to Gaara or not (for the love of god, don't make it another fem, Shukaku is batshit crazy already and definitely, inarguably 100% male. I mean c'mon, giant Tanuki? All I can ever think of is balls whenever I see Tanuki mentally)

Well, war is on the horizon now, should be interesting to see what happens next.

Just thought I'd mention that I've enjoyed your story and hope its not done yet. This site tends to have a lot of people that just read and don't review, hope that doesn't get you down.

love this damn story and this chapter was so freaking epic thank you for the great read =)