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Loved it! I'm really happy to see Naruto and Naruko get together, and is the image of Kushina a sign that she's going to be joining in soon? The last scene with Gamakichi and Gamatatsu was hilarious. I bet Gamabunta is going to be mad at them for now having to give his son The Talk. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! :)

As long as the characters are made age appropriate as always, my vote is Ivy, Ororo Munroe, and Orihime Inoue.

Well, this story has become disturbing indeed. Incest I can deal with, but self-cest? That's just weird. Aside from that, I'm rather surprised that Naruto can generate Senjutsu Chakra while in motion. From the way you were playing up his other self, I figured she would be the more powerful of the two. Of course, that probably hasn't changed. Afterall, Bunta refers to her as Lieutenant, and Naruto as underling, right? That's gotta count for something right? Perhaps she'll even go on to become Hokage. But at least Naruto would fulfill one of his dreams that way I suppose. Afterall, his weird female self still counts in that regard. I expect nothing less from her at this point.

As you can see, I don't like Naruko. Her existence is weird, the fact that Naruto is sleeping with her is weird, and the fact that the Toads like Naruto weird clone more than his true self is weird. Aside from that though, your story is pretty good. Good luck with the rest of it.

Nice chapter. Interesting events definetly took place. Mainly the conflict between Nagato and Konan. And while I'm leery about the whole Naruto/Naruko thing (it's just odd IMO), the lemon wasn't bad. I'm a bit disappointed though that Naruto won't have the epic one on one match up against Nagato that he had in canon. Instead, it will be Naruto/Naruko/possibly Konan vs. Nagato. Not as cool.

Thanks for the update.

Hey, I'm the anon review that bitched about Naruko in your story. Look man, sorry about being such a dick in that review. I wasn't having a very good day yesterday, and lashed out at your story. I'm man enough to man up and apologize for being an asshole. Even though I don't like Naruko, I don't really have a right to complain, since it is your story.

I just wanted to get that out there. I won't let that happen again. Good luck with the rest of your story.

I just wanted to say I picked up your story a couple weeks ago, and really enjoyed it as I got caught up to the latest chapters. I'm looking forward to the pain battle that's upcoming.

Nice chapter!

Jiraiya’s death was so sad but glad he found a woman he could love before he went out like a man. LOVE this story so glad that despite everything thats gone on with sites being a pain or closing that you have kept writing it THANK YOU for that.

Ohayo, Sage-dono

This chapter went completeley opposite to what I was expecting. With Tsunade on the verge of breaking down, hinting toward a major character's death that would affect her. The Lead up to Danzo's Fight with Naruto was Epic and although I struggled to keep up at times with the fight (I have a active imagination and tend to visualise the scenario described), it did end realistically. Disappointed that Danzo won't have to face all that he has done, but his nature would not have allowed it. The Maturity Naruto displays is something I wished he had in the Manga and Anime. All in All, I loved this chapter.

Glad that you did something unique with the Jiraiya Vs. Pein fight. Awesome that you gave Jiraiya a legacy in the form of a child and I hope that Tsunade & Naruto learn about the child at some point. The fact that Naruto & Naruko will be going through Sage Training just brings so much potential that the next chapter will definitely be awesome.

kinda felt that the chapter was a bit short, but considering it's split into two parts it is understandable.

Keep up the Awesomeness =]