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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Another chapter from you; and it's Pakura as promised.
And you left us with the dreaded cliffhanger, the bane of all readers! Still it kinda makes me want to know what is going to happen next. And I sincerely hope that you'll deliver.
And you left us with the dreaded cliffhanger, the bane of all readers! Still it kinda makes me want to know what is going to happen next. And I sincerely hope that you'll deliver.
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like all the plot, but I'm not sure how I feel about the constant introduction of new characters from other anime/etc.
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
im glad you updated this story. one of the best naruxharems fics out there. the lemons are so hot!
do you do requests? id like 1 or 2 yuri pairings to be written about if possible. thanks!
do you do requests? id like 1 or 2 yuri pairings to be written about if possible. thanks!
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad to see this being updated, it's a great story and I can't wait to see more. I'm most excited about the upcoming conflict from Danzo, and how the situation at the prison is going to play out. Please update soon!
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Lemon sage good luck next chapters
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mito really? The only way I see that working is through either going back in time or Edo Tensai, so I am mighty curious who else you are going to use like maybe some of the Uzumaki women who were said to have died in the Whirlpool Invasion, or maybe more girls with bloodlines like a female Kaguya, of course if Naruto does go back in time he might give in to the temptation to prevent his parents deaths?!
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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till it's Kurotsuchi's turn but I'm also looking forward to Mikoto, Mei, Hokuto, Guren (who almost definitely hates Orochimaru now), Kasumi, Sasame, Kotohime (who I think survived because of Jiraiya), Isaribi, Menō Shirogane, Haruna, Toki (Land of Birds), Samui, Karui, Suzumebachi, Hanare, Hotaru, Moegi, Kagura (maybe), Ni and Sara get their turns since you haven't added them yet since you most likely will.
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January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love this fucking story and can't fucking wait to read another fucking chapter full of fucking cock. This is fucking Jashin damn good Erotica that makes me fucking cum, yet it still is a fucking good story plot and fucking all of that. I can't wait till he fucks the fucking Mizukage Mei Terumi and fucks Kurenai after Asuma goes and be's a fucking pussy and fucking dies at the hands of my favourite fucking charater Hidan leaving the poor bitch pregnant and alone, perfect for Naruto to swoop in and fucking seduce his way into her fucking tight cunt.
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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hidy hidy,
I have to say, I was greatly disappointed to miss this on Fanfiction dot net. Though, I did check and noticed you had reposted it. Sadly, it may get deleted again or possibly get your account there banned. I hope not, though.
The best thing is that I came here, vaguely remembering you mention it, and found three chapters waiting for me! HUZZAH!
I have to say, I'm very much enjoying this story. It isn't even all the sex. I actually skim the lemons unless it's a character I particularly enjoy (example - I don't personally see enough Hinata, who is my favorite female.) Ino, though, is my second favorite female, so I'm actually rather enjoying the duality there. She was his first girl, but she's also the one girl he is really having issues and troubles with.
I have to say, Kushina was something I only mildly expected to see join the harem. Katsuya, however, is something that totally surprised me (at least the foreshadowing that Naruto just may very well get the boss summon.) I had actually been both curious and a little worried (still a little worried) about Nami Naruto. I'm glad to know that the technique can't be used by her, but my fear is in just what she CAN foil for our lusty hero and heroines.
I have to say, I REALLY appreciated how you went about things with the female Root member, Komachi I think. The amusing thing was the barest attempt at critical thinking got her to switch sides so thoroughly.
Adieu,
Paladeus
I have to say, I was greatly disappointed to miss this on Fanfiction dot net. Though, I did check and noticed you had reposted it. Sadly, it may get deleted again or possibly get your account there banned. I hope not, though.
The best thing is that I came here, vaguely remembering you mention it, and found three chapters waiting for me! HUZZAH!
I have to say, I'm very much enjoying this story. It isn't even all the sex. I actually skim the lemons unless it's a character I particularly enjoy (example - I don't personally see enough Hinata, who is my favorite female.) Ino, though, is my second favorite female, so I'm actually rather enjoying the duality there. She was his first girl, but she's also the one girl he is really having issues and troubles with.
I have to say, Kushina was something I only mildly expected to see join the harem. Katsuya, however, is something that totally surprised me (at least the foreshadowing that Naruto just may very well get the boss summon.) I had actually been both curious and a little worried (still a little worried) about Nami Naruto. I'm glad to know that the technique can't be used by her, but my fear is in just what she CAN foil for our lusty hero and heroines.
I have to say, I REALLY appreciated how you went about things with the female Root member, Komachi I think. The amusing thing was the barest attempt at critical thinking got her to switch sides so thoroughly.
Adieu,
Paladeus
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January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello Eroninja,
I am a writer from FanFiction.net who browses through Adult Fanfiction for lemon inspiration. I will not give my pen name unless you would like to see my work. I spent a week slowly reading through this whole story and I have to say I am impressed at your ability to involve multiple girls in a massive harem without ever forgetting one girl in the mix. My suggestion for a target should be Kurotsuchi, Onoki's granddaughter. With Naruto's harem girls being people of high influence (kages, a daimyo, clan heirs, secretary to kage, jinchuriki, etc), I'm sure her say in her village of Iwa would help get Iwa to submit to Naruto
Well that's my suggestion. Thanks for listening to my rant.
Shadowfox
I am a writer from FanFiction.net who browses through Adult Fanfiction for lemon inspiration. I will not give my pen name unless you would like to see my work. I spent a week slowly reading through this whole story and I have to say I am impressed at your ability to involve multiple girls in a massive harem without ever forgetting one girl in the mix. My suggestion for a target should be Kurotsuchi, Onoki's granddaughter. With Naruto's harem girls being people of high influence (kages, a daimyo, clan heirs, secretary to kage, jinchuriki, etc), I'm sure her say in her village of Iwa would help get Iwa to submit to Naruto
Well that's my suggestion. Thanks for listening to my rant.
Shadowfox