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Hope you update soon love the story

This is good, first time I've seen an 'Evil Dumbledore' version of Sarutobi as well. The way you described the various Demons reminds me of the demons from the Monkey Magic tv show (I know it's just called 'Monkey', but that theme song...).

I like the Bleach elements and really have no negatives to complain about, well done.

great story please update

I've only read a bit of the story, skipping around a bit in the first chapter, though I have realized one problem with the story from just skimming it. The problem is that the chapters are too large, so it's harder for a reader to focus and keep track of where they are in each chapter. My suggestion is that you keep the story exactly the same, but release each chapter as a Part 1 and Part 2, instead of one large page, so that readers focus on the story more.