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update man!!!!
please update this story ...not completing this story would be a sin!!! ;) pl update man!!! you must!

Oh dear Kami give me more! Danny, epic idea and I can't wait to see what the future may hold for our maybe not so future Fifth Hokage.

I wonder if our ever-scheming friend Gatou will make an appearance to bid on Tsunade(and hopefully win) in future chapters. This is something that is right up his alley after all. I also wonder if you will have Mr Green place a Loyalty(slavery) seal on Tsunade and Shizune for whoever purchases them in the end? It would certainly be a great benefit for whoever wins the bidding, since they'll have a forever loyal ninja bodyguard and mistress.

I do hope that you bring us the full deal next time. Still I liked how Mr Green tried to push Tsunade out of her belief that she was in control even though she was tied up. I got a kick out of his double meaning with Shizune being fed three square meals though and wonder if he might have Shizune make an appearance in the room with Tsunade as soon as the younger girl is broken as they say.

Anyway I really liked both of your stories and I really hope you update them both soon(Preferably Jiraiya's Lust as I love Kushina). Thanks for writing and don't stop:)

now the real show begins with tsunade, could had been a bit longer but the brutal fuck with shizune was best

dear god please yes continue i would love to see a true dark lemon fic, its been ages since i read something good from the last fic that just god deleted ``fifths long week´´
i do like how the style will go here as tsunade will be forced to pay dearly her debts being trapped and weak only to be the beggining.
i just hope you the best luck, we really needs stories and writers like these more often

Great start looking forward to seeing what happens next