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Nice chapter glad you are updating this again cant wait to see what is next from when you posted it on FF

great story can not wait for the fight with neji

Another good chapter. Can't wait for more. Naruto is going to kick Neji's ass.

maybe the problem is the font size and spacing is different from this organization's. A suggestion put it on notepad then see how it is if it is as it is here change it so it is to your liking but for the story nice and maybe after the Chunnin exams and the retrieval arc (if it still going to happen) you put Hinata on team seven as a replacement for Sasuke if he is not there or have sakura be put on team eight because of sakura's chakra control she is able to do mid to close range genjustus and is moderately well at taijustu but needs more stamina she has the strength not the speed that is one of her problems but this is yours and all of this is a suggestion. Also who is the third person that is going to be in this story since I did not have an account on fanfiction.net as well as not knowing about said website before the purge I have no idea who is involved in the recreation of the UZUMAKI/NAMIKAZE clan or if Hinata starts taking the name of her dreams Hinata Uzumaki or will she have to take the name of Hinata Namikaze?

Good filler. Bring on more pervy stuff. ME WANT PERVY STUFF!

Very nice fic, but Im a bit put off by how large of a spacing you put between lines, but none the less good, and I really hope you dont stop writing any time soon. I look forward to more of this story and more lomony sticky goodness lol!

Nice! Shame there were no lemons. Maybe later.

Great chapter can't wait for next one.

Awesome! Naruto's got his slave and hiashi is a moron. LOL! Could you have someone kick hiashi in the nuts? Like naruto or kurenai or anko?

Im glad this updated cant wait till this is caught up with the 1 that was on FF last year