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Hey! First thing I'd like to say is : YEEES! I found it again!

I read this story on FF.net first, but then, impossible to find it again. Meh, anyway, great story, I really like it and I hope next chapter will come soon.

If you want to contact me and answer this review, I have the same penname on FF.net. Oh, and I've written a few fics, would be nice to have your opinion :3

Hey, RAMrunner i just wanted to remind you of a plot hole in ch.8. Curse seal is visible on the forehead of the bearer of it. Thus when naruto removed the curse seal from hinata's forehead it shouldn't be visible. When hinata came after bath she only had a towel and nothing to cover a forehead. Since hiashi was watching her, then he should've have noticed her caged bird seal missing. Another question : will hinata be continuing ninja career, since she is now in care of naruto? Btw, nice story. Had fun reading it. Keep up the good work.

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Finally an update! It's like, years, man! I am really, REALLY hoping that you can get this story to its end. I followed this story of yours at FFN before the purges, and is extremely surprised when your story gets removed when other, more horrible stories remains existing. Fucking idiots, the lot of 'em. Anyway, I really wished that you can continue this up to or beyond the point when you published it in FFN and hopefully finish it. Thanks for continuing this story for our reading pleasure!

This story seems a bit interesting. So, I will read. And probably a better version (though don't hold me on it) of the technique name would be ending with Just a Kai (release) or Fuuin Kai (Seal Release). And Ougi is a different version of technique, but it might work.

Oh my god. We waited sooo long for these chapters and still no lemons? Pls post new chapter asap ;)

ogu= secret

Nice work. I like it so far.

Man, I liked this story because of the slave concept, and especially since most master->slave stories I found on FF.net is yaoi somehow, so when I found out that FF.net burned it, it disappoints me. But at least you're continuing here. Though I realized that you only have 5 chapters here instead of the 12/13 (I forgot) chapters available on FF.net. If your notes on it is gone, I cannot help you with that, sadly , since I did not save a copy of the story. But I really, really hoped that this story can be continued to its end, if any. Thanks for supplying this awesome story.

Feels like you ended it half way through the chapter to be honest. I want to know what Naruto's gonna say and do.

Just realized that your story was taken off ff.net hope to see you continue it here it was great so far.