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for Story of the Ten Tailed Wolf

by Pokemaster12

person Nephthys
schedule February 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

this is a VERY good story. however, are there going to be more chapters? i have a few ideas for some chapters. one is that akane and naruto and akane actually succeed in having tailed-children. another is that sasuke finds out about naruto's summoning scroll and demands naruto to give it to him.

person Nephthys
schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

good story. but what happens after that? please update the story.

person Nephthys
schedule January 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

i have a few ideas for a few new chapters for the story. one idea is that anko's team and kakashi's team are forced to work on an a ranked mission. on the way to their destination outside of the villlage, they run into trouble. to make things quick, naruto does a summoning jutsu. everyone in the vicinity, except for akane, is shockedat his summons. after the virtual slaughter of the enemy, and the dragon is sent back home, sasuke DEMANDS that naruto tells him what happened, where naruto found the scroll and that naruto lets him sign the dragon summoning scroll. naruto tells him that if sasuke can't beat HIM, there is no way that he will be able to beat the boss summons.things go from there. another idea is that as naruto an akane get laid, akane gets pregnant. end result, their child/cildren have between one and ten tails. i will leave the rest of it to you. after all, these are ideas, not a command. and i mean that with the greatest of respect.

schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
to Protect him from his fathers enemys that's the most shittys excuse for not telling naruto about his Parents i have ever heard if he can keep the fact that he knows about the kyubi a secret then he can keep it a secret that he knows about his Parents a secret
person Tempest
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just reading the first chapter already has me hooked to the story. The plots looks really interesting.
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE...I NEED MORE!! Please post again, PLEASE!! Ok, incredibly pathetic begging over with. Seriously though, you are really good, incredibly so. Granted there are a lot of spelling mistakes and wrong word usage not to mention there are some sentences that make very little sense, but all that aside your story and plot line are amazingly easy to follow, and your comedic scenes are hilarious by the way. I really hope you post another chapter soon, this story is too good to let die.
person Stone20
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello I follow you from FF and am happy to see you still posting. I hoping you can help me do you know how you add a story so it alerts you with a new chapter


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