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November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying this story even if it was slow getting to the lemons but up until this point in the story you had been so very original. Now even with the changes to the team it feels like I am watching the Anime and not the original story that I was enjoying.
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November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This must be your dirty form of the story cause it reads so much like Council Foliy but this could use some editing other then that it should be enjoyable.
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading chapter 4 and I must say that I'm truly enjoying this story here. I've always liked the Naruto & Temari pairing & this spin-off is just amazing to say the least. In my opinion, the slow pace is a good thing and an excellent ideal on your part. Most ppl enjoy actually stories and not just immediate sex with no plot...this makes the story much more in-depth and believable. So keep up the good work...time for me to continue with chapter 5. 2 thumbs up!!
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June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
how do i add this story to my favorites on this site?