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Now I think I understand Neji's problem. This is so good every chapter gives me something to wanna keep reading and come back for more. Minus a few grammar/spelling errors this is a great and original idea that I love. I especially like how Shikamaru keeps denying his want to help and is slowly starting to like Neji. I can't wait for their get together which will hopefully happen soon.

Holy Crap!! I love every minute of reading this!! How do you do it..I mean the characters seem so real!
I can't wait to read more of this installment...
I was so hoping they would have gotten together at the end :O(

I'm smiling a mile because chapter 9 was awesome! Definitely my favorite so far from beginning to end. It was sweet it was slightly angering it was real. I feel so bad for Neji but I'm still not sure what's wrong with him exactly I'm just happy Shikamaru took it upon himself to help out, troublesome or not. And before I forget, wish the anime/manga would have gone there too, I love that you made Shika a smoker and how you expleained his reason for why he'd started. To each his own smokers and non smokers I just think when certain guys do it like Shika it looks hot. Nice added touch. This is so good.

Ok so I made it to chpt 6, I'm still enthralled if not a little confused about Neji's issues but that's part of the fun of reading. Besides a couple of spelling/grammar errors and slight very slight OOCness this is still really good. I loved the small moments of Neji and Shika walking in the woods and Shikamaru's concern and taking care of Neji when he has his episodes. Their chemisry is so good. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I just read the first chapter and I was so enthralled by every second of it. I really hope the entire story is just as good I can't wait to read more. The emotions of Neji and Shikamaru were so intense and the mystery of why Neji ran from the team in the first place had me curious to keep reading, once they started fighting, and yelling I was hooked. The kiss at the end definitely clenched the deal for me I'll be back to read more and review later.