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neh, if tachi wants a piece of naru, wouldn't he want to dom? i don't think naru would be good with that... also what's the point of taking male mates, unless this has m preg in it or they're to help ease the load of child baring female mates?
i look forward to finding out why shika and shino haven't gone for the test yet too.
also, kudos on the lack of spelling/grammar mistakes. this is much better and easier to read.

Well one thing is for certain; you whip out plots like there is no tomorrow. And I'm jealous as fuck of that, lol.
So I know you have the creativity, you just now need to work one your skill. Don't just quickly type something out then upload it instantly. Get the rough idea down then go back through your stories several times to fix spelling mistakes and grammar errors. This also allows you to make the plot thicker, add twists, get rid of stuff that's too OOC and really work your plot into something fabulous. You have that basic skill and I can see that you love writing, so now work on improving the quality and stop focussing so much on the quality.
I wish you good luck in all your future fictions :)

This is one of the most brilliant and exciting stories I've ever read!!! I love these names you've come up with for their techniques. I Really love that Kiba is the submissive although I know there's no difference.:3. I so look forward to seeing how Naruto handles Sasuke and also my 'husband' Neji's technique/style.x3