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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Hot, intense and sweet at the same time! Loved the ending too!
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A powerful and beautifully written story. I also think such a clever person as Shodaime wouldn't have been fooled by Madara's fake death.
Why did he keep it a secret from everyone else? Did he? Because Konoha's safety should be his priority..
I'd like more a detailed picture of M.'s Tsukuyomi.. it didn't feel like torture for Hashirama, so..?
Interesting: Hashirama compares their kiss to Amaterasu. Did he experience it firsthand - and lived???
Was it *that* easy to control Kyuubi during their battle?.. I wonder. Details, details..
And why was Hashirama showed dying peacefully, old, in his bed while in "Naruto" he died during the war, a middle-aged person? An OOC detail?
But the last sentence is most intriguing: why 'illusion' of love? Because it *was* just lust, nothing more? Or what?
Thank you. I really enjoyed the story! A powerful pairing, strong emotions - although not everything's clear.
Why did he keep it a secret from everyone else? Did he? Because Konoha's safety should be his priority..
I'd like more a detailed picture of M.'s Tsukuyomi.. it didn't feel like torture for Hashirama, so..?
Interesting: Hashirama compares their kiss to Amaterasu. Did he experience it firsthand - and lived???
Was it *that* easy to control Kyuubi during their battle?.. I wonder. Details, details..
And why was Hashirama showed dying peacefully, old, in his bed while in "Naruto" he died during the war, a middle-aged person? An OOC detail?
But the last sentence is most intriguing: why 'illusion' of love? Because it *was* just lust, nothing more? Or what?
Thank you. I really enjoyed the story! A powerful pairing, strong emotions - although not everything's clear.