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June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot, and it fit them to a tee, it had the anger and the volatile nature that those two usually between each other, everythng between them is always rough and raw, they settle things best with physical means instead of words, nice, thanks for the awesome read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In the beginning I thought it was a flashback from the past, when Sasuke was a Konoha ninja. But it seems both guys belong to different villages. Is Sasuke from Oto (now)? Were they from the same village in the past?
These sensual scenes are very good for a beginning, but a bit of explanation why they have so much pent up anger and aggression towards each other is necessary.
Good luck with the story! Feral Naruto is absolutely amazing, just as his gentle, loving side..
These sensual scenes are very good for a beginning, but a bit of explanation why they have so much pent up anger and aggression towards each other is necessary.
Good luck with the story! Feral Naruto is absolutely amazing, just as his gentle, loving side..