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for Don't Betray A Demon

by Cordytoad

person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
kushina should meet naruto and have sex
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kushina could still be influenced by Jiraiya, Sarutobi and Naruto himself to still spike her lust naruto
should remove Jiraiya, and Sarutobi influence over kushina or keyeout Jiraiya, and Sarutobi so that Jiraiya, and Sarutobi won't be able spike kushina lust onely naruto himself can spike his mother's lust which would give naruto control over Jiraiya, and Sarutobi beside naruto has minato's blood
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sandiame and Jiraiya is keyed to Kushina's seal so that they can command her but naruto should remove Sandiame and Jiraiya Influence on kushina seal so that only naruto can command her
person highgod
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sandiame and Jiraiya are keyed to the seal on Kushina so that they could Influence and command kushina's lust ---- [ but make minato and naruto keyeing to kushina's seal be "primary key command" to Influence and command kushina ]--- which could overrule Sandiame and Jiraiya Influence and command over kushina so that if Sandiame and Jiraiya betray minato with somthing or tries to use kushina for themself and there use then minato and his offspring or someone with his genes can overrule Sandiame and Jiraiya Influence and command on kushina
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
make naruto sex between naruto and kushina or make kushina naruto's sex slave onely he can control
person Rednova
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey dude can u do a beastiality one with kushina and akamaru or do one with kiba and kushina
person andy
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love the story would love to see more updates
person Akuma
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looking to his left at the though of the ramen chef, Naruto smirked. Sitting on a lounge chair in the living room while Mikoto fucked herself on the man's 9 inch dick, moaning like the whore she was.
Last chapter you said 7 inches? Old guys don't jump in size.
person Revan_55
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this story appeals to certain fetishes of mine so good story.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic but when are you gonna update?