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Hopefully Jiraiya can be an ally of Naruto in this life as well. As for what Naruto can offer him, how about time with both Tsunade, Shizune, and occasionally Kurenai (I figure Minato would have placed the seal on both Tsunade and Shizune, while Naruto would place one on Kurenai). Although Jiraiya would have to help get Kushina out of Sarutobi's clutches (maybe send Sarutobi Tsume and a Hyuuga as playtoys).

Although for part of Naruto's revenge against Tsunade, how about he has her 'work' to pay off her debts. And by putting Jiraiya in charge of it, would allow him to get some great research material using Tsunade and/or Shizune, pay off Tsunade's debts, and most importantly be able to make Tsunade's 'customers' unable to talk to people about what they did with her.

Althjough I'm going to ask if Naruto can have Yugito Nii, Fu, Mei Terumi, Guren, Yugao Uzuki, and Koyuki Kazehana as some of his personal girls that he doesn't share (he'll need some women just for himself alone to use some of his stamina on). As for Kushina, I can see Naruto sharing her between himself, Kyuubi, Teuchi and occasionally Jiraiya.

Hopefully Hinata's mother also lived, that way Naruto can fuck both her and Neji's mother. And he might even be able to make a deal with Hiashi to allow Naruto to grab several attractive female branch members to use as slaves, if Hiashi can be allowed to fuck Neji's mother and Hanabi whenever he wants without trouble.

Also maybe Teuchi should expand his shop to include Dango and Naruto can help add a Spicy Anko to the menu after enslaving Anko.

I'll say to go with mystery candidate #3, unless you are having Naruto also claim either Hinata's or Ino's mother when he claims their respective daughter.

I love revenge fic like this and you do a great job at the lemons. I espeicailly like that Kyuubi has joined Naruto by taking over Sasuke, that's brilliant. I vote for mystery candidate 3. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!

thank you for sharing this fantastic story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a. = (as soon as life allows)also i beg you please never abandon this story

Hinata would be a very nice choice here! I wouldn't mind Naruto making a deal with Hiashi in strenghtening the Byakugan, which the clan head would agree to (oh, the naive fool). Then the blond would fuch his little, shy and cute half-sister (I remember that Minato here was the father of almost all genin from Naruto's generation).

You know u still haven't given reason for why naruto hates his mother why he is even working with the kyuubi hell he should hate him and screw him over. this fic makes no sense what so ever, so many plot holes its incredible, it seems more like a retard wrote this.

I would like to see Naruto break Hinata's spirit by fucking one of his 'slaves' infront of her(or in another way. It's your choice man) before putting the seal on her.

Next target should be Hinata and Ino while the person Naruto saw should be Tsunade.

well... you could make dark hinata that join him willingly (spell? lol) without seal... let me explain the motives:

1)naruto need at least 1 alpha mate that isn't a simply slave
2)"evil" hinata is not used very often, so it will be a nice change
3)she has a load of political power
4)i don't think she will ever betray naruto... it's like sakura hating sasuke. lol.
5)dominatrix hinata... lol.. you could put in even naughty stuff with hanabi if you feel perverted enough
6)or you can make her mad ala harley quinn...

and i am a naru-hina fan... lol

A good story thus far though I don't understand the 'betrayal ending' at the start of this. Perhaps Tsunade was being controlled by someone else?