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for Finally Whole

by assassi

person Hera234
schedule July 30, 2023 at 12:00 AM
person Alexandria
schedule March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww that's sooooo sweet I cried just a little when Shunsui said "daddy". I'm happy that Iruka and Kakashi finally found the love they were looking for in each other.
person cienne
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, this is such a heart warming story. Even if Iruka had to go through that darn Orochimaru's experiments, I think it was worth it to have a family with Kakashi. I'm glad you didn't drag out the pregnancy scenes because it makes it more endearing and leaves us wanting more. Great, great job. I hope you come up with more stories like this.
person tk04
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aawh i just love it. The ending of the story made me smile. Its so cute.