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December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yes, i would love to read more from you i think you have alot of talent. keep writing your very good at it. and i agree with the other readers this could turn into a beautiful multi-chapter story :)
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This needs to be wayyyyy more than a one-shot! It needs more chapters, make it evolve into more than just this. Ugh. (:
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! It's so hot!!!! I love it!
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July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Your Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh you write very well. This fic was sad but not overly so. It kind of left me feeling hopeful that they will one day be together as a couple :D
Keep writing! You're good at this!!
Keep writing! You're good at this!!
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally say anything about A/Ns, but yours made me LOL. I will indeed look for a different fic the next time I feel like indulging my poor, tortured heart that no one in the world could possibly understand. ;)
(Regarding your second author's note, if you're looking for places to archive your work, aside from "the den of voles," have you also looked into getting an LJ account and/or AO3? If you like feedback and interacting with readers, the other two sites are much easier/better for that. There's also y-gal, but YMMV on that one. Writers like the social aspects of it; a lot of readers find it too much of a hassle to use for following fics.)
I liked that they were both equally guilty in this fic, and equally pathetic. There weren't any good guys or bad guys in this. Sakura is Sasuke's girlfriend, but she's Naruto's friend, too and he has some responsibility to her as well, and he knows it. Just like he knows no one has forced him into this affair and that he could choose to leave it at any time, but he doesn't. They are both in a bad situation, and they are both contributing to it. I feel sorry for them, yet I also feel like they deserve some of their unhappiness. Who knows what could happen if they ever reach their breaking point with the situation... It would either kill them or cure them, I think. Nice fic. :)
(Regarding your second author's note, if you're looking for places to archive your work, aside from "the den of voles," have you also looked into getting an LJ account and/or AO3? If you like feedback and interacting with readers, the other two sites are much easier/better for that. There's also y-gal, but YMMV on that one. Writers like the social aspects of it; a lot of readers find it too much of a hassle to use for following fics.)
I liked that they were both equally guilty in this fic, and equally pathetic. There weren't any good guys or bad guys in this. Sakura is Sasuke's girlfriend, but she's Naruto's friend, too and he has some responsibility to her as well, and he knows it. Just like he knows no one has forced him into this affair and that he could choose to leave it at any time, but he doesn't. They are both in a bad situation, and they are both contributing to it. I feel sorry for them, yet I also feel like they deserve some of their unhappiness. Who knows what could happen if they ever reach their breaking point with the situation... It would either kill them or cure them, I think. Nice fic. :)
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. So heart breaking. I kinda wished this continued on into a full story!!