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for Naruto Ultimate Harem Marmalade Party

by Uskius

person Really
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This fic is just god awful. The plot is idiotic, while the sex scene descriptions are horrible. "Naruto increased his sexing up"... really, are you five? Please leave the harem fics (or any fics for that matter) to the people like c0p13r, who can write a lemon with characters I dislike, yet will make the fic great with well thoughtout scenes and plots. If you need to ask for his or other's help because this is a waste of time fic. It's bland as hell.

Look, I'm a fan of Naruto but just because I am, doesn't mean I'm going to like everything he's in, just cause he's in it with a harem. If anyone actually gives you review of how they like this fic, it's because they're too retarded to know what a good fic is because of their blinded Naruto love.