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Dude this is actually a really good read, but at the same time every time I see a Femdom story like this I am having difficulty putting my thoughts in to words. I'll simply say your really fucked up in the head.

You know there's two drawings, one from Dreadge(http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1053226#search=dreadge), and one from Arteria(http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/984926#search=arteria) (both Tsunade/Naruto) that immediately made me think of this story, look them up ! I hope those pictures will motivate you to update your Awesome story soon.

Update! Yes! I am happy =) Thery Hot and interesting. I hope continue being soon =)

Gotta love a woman in charge. I'd love to see Tsunade pimp Naruto to several women in Konoha in later chapters.

This is a really awesome start to a story, there are so few Naruto stories out the like this. I really hope to see more, update soon!

I'm really impressed with this fic so far, there really is't enoug naruto femdom fics out there. I like the way this story is going so far and am excited to finally have a fic where naruto is forced to submit to women. keep up the great work. I can't wait for some new chapters!

I loved this! not a lot of femdom and the ones that are their are usually, anko putting on a leather outfit while naruto fucks her.
you got naruto in a shota slut suit and foot fetish. plus their is some thought into this, the genjutsu dream was a nice touch. dont abandon this story and keep updating, soon and often.

Hot stuff and I encourage you to keep it up! :).

But that said, maybe you should consider getting someone to correct your texts a bit - the beginning of each sentence as well as names should have a capital letter, you know. Also, there's spelling errors/mistakes here and there - for example, it's supposed to be "genin", not "genie" or "gennin" ;)

Either way, hoping to see more soon! One question, is Sakura still Tsunade's disciple in your version of Naruto? If so, how about having Tsunade let Sakura have a go or two at Naruto (especially if she herself is busy with something)? After all, if she's still Tsunade's disciple in your version, then she might as well be Tsunade's dominatrix-in-training as well XD. At least, since I gather from what you've written so far that Tsunade may eventually have other women "try out" Naruto, that itself shouldn't be much of a problem :)

I have great hopes for your fanfic. Have not read anything like it. Very hot! I can not wait to see more fetishes. You need to put this story on different sites. I have seen many people who have been waiting such a story.
I'll look forward to continuing.
I'll look forward to continuing. Sorry for my bad English. Naruto so slut =)

Nice begining, looking forward to seeing where it goes. I agree that there isn't enough femdom in Naruto fanfiction. I even have an outline for one such fic in need of adoption if your interested.