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by Sasunarufan13

schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi SasuNaruFan13! Just wanted to say that that was a very well done story! It was a lot of fun to read and so cute. I did catch a few grammatical errors, but that's just because I'm a grammer-Nazi. ;) I can't wait to read more of your stories! There's not much constructive criticism I can offer besides to just be careful about your tenses, especially your verbs. Thanks for this amazing story for my first review ever!
person CazzyLove
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Who ever this CazzyLove is must be a pretty special person for you to have writing this awesome smut for her birthday ^_^ Thank You so much honey, it was the perfect way to end my day, Vodka, Pop and Smut ^_^ This has been my best birthday in years, thank you for being part of making it so good ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
love peace and chocolate ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Blessed Be ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Cazzy ^_^ ^_^ ^_^