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for Breaking the Pattern

by Darkprism

person lo
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad you are still active. The whole emotional build up to this final chapter really made it great. I love the deep emotional connection that they had and that they are ever building on. Great work, you really make the characters come alive in your work. You are truly talented.
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love their rapport. Those two make dysfunctional so ridiculously sexy.
person Nejislady
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm really impressed with Sasuke. He's really trying to be nice and loving. I can just picture him all dolled up with his blue sapphire earrings on. I wish I could draw cuz I'd be on that. I love Shikamaru's incite on people. You write Naruto so manly in this and it's wonderful. Can't wait for the last part.
person lo
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I love the Sasuke's struggle with himself and his attempt at improving his relationship with Naruto and himself, it's sweet. And I really enjoy his interactions with Shikamaru,the fun conversations they have are great and I love the grudging respect they have for each other. Great work!
person lo
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how Sasuke's ineptitude at dealing with himself and others. And I really find is interactions with Shikamaru really entertaining. Great work!