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for One Unfortunate Blonde

by Provocative_Zephyr

person Smaffa
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This has a good start so far; I look forward to seeing how Shiro will finally snag Naruto. I like how you've written the dialogue and Hidan's first line was especially hilarious! Keep up the good work.