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April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really loooove this story. Read the whole thing in one sitting, and now it's soon 7 am o_o. Can't belive I sat up all night , didn't notice the time flying I was so into it. I really hope you will write more.
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update this story soon! I really like this story and I would very much enjoy seeing it completed. :D Please and thank you!!
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September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't read much naruto fanfics but this one is delightful and researched
naruto and minato are adorable and you set an excellant pace and snap shots of this alternate timeline
its refreshing
so are you going to update soon?
naruto and minato are adorable and you set an excellant pace and snap shots of this alternate timeline
its refreshing
so are you going to update soon?
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May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm just now coming to this story and I love it! You've consumed much of the last two days of my life. Not complaining. If my readers come after you for hindering my progress on my stories, not my fault. ^_^ Baby Kakashi is just too cute! And Sakumo . . . naughty, naughty. Can't wait to see more of the Uchiha. I also agree that you don't have to change anything because of Tobi's real identity, but you might have to do some mental gymnastics to make him Tobi, unless you want to abandon Tobi (Naruto's like, where the F*** is he?). At least Rin is unlikely to die. I kind of hope you'll let non-orphan/asshole Kakashi and Rin get together.So sad though that there's not even a baby Sasuke running around yet. I want to see more of infant Itachi. Maybe Mikoto makes him godfather or something. Anyway, I've very much enjoyed this story; not sure why I haven't read it before. Keep up the good work!
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated on this page to that is fantiastic!!!! Thank you so much for the email^^ and hope to hear from you agian soon^^
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just started reading this story and wow its so good. couldn't stop reading until the last updated chapter. you have a real knack for writing. the story is well paced and its very descriptive. will be patiently waiting for the next chapter. I think minato and naruto are so cute lovely relationship they have so far.
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY! So happy to see more updates to this story! Thank you so much, can't wait to read the next chappie :D !
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March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good god this story is amazing. You must finish it. I don't know what has caused such a long delay in updates, perhaps you moved to FF.net? I'll have to see if this story is on there or if you have a profile with info that you update. Anyways, this is one of the better stories I've come across in a long time.
I didn't know how I would react to the idea of MinaNaru, but... this pairing is growing on me and it's all because of you and your wonderful characterizations. You have take the time to build up detailed, specific quirks to all of your characters and their relationships with on another, and I find myself constantly wanting to read more and more. The plot is also intriguing and well paced. You manage multiple subplots along with your main one, which keeps the reader hook, but you also manage to not get bogged down in extraneous information. This is the sign of a truly talented storyteller.
If you ever need an editor/beta/someone to bounce ideas off of (to help with writer's block or plot deciphering) feel free to shout at me. My FFnet name is MagicalMistressSarai, and I would love to collaborate or work with you. This story has been the highlight of my weekend.
I didn't know how I would react to the idea of MinaNaru, but... this pairing is growing on me and it's all because of you and your wonderful characterizations. You have take the time to build up detailed, specific quirks to all of your characters and their relationships with on another, and I find myself constantly wanting to read more and more. The plot is also intriguing and well paced. You manage multiple subplots along with your main one, which keeps the reader hook, but you also manage to not get bogged down in extraneous information. This is the sign of a truly talented storyteller.
If you ever need an editor/beta/someone to bounce ideas off of (to help with writer's block or plot deciphering) feel free to shout at me. My FFnet name is MagicalMistressSarai, and I would love to collaborate or work with you. This story has been the highlight of my weekend.
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, pretty please with your favourite fruit added on too, update soon!!!
And please send me a message when you do, because I really want to read what you write.
You have created some of the most engaging characters I have come across. Particularly the relationship between the two main characters is fantastic!
This was a great chapter. The bit with minato was hot, and cute. The description of the baby was adorable. The bit with the baby was sweet. The bit with jijii throwing the paperweight out the window and mailing Naruto was funny. The ending was great! So please update soon! I want to read what happens!
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And please send me a message when you do, because I really want to read what you write.
You have created some of the most engaging characters I have come across. Particularly the relationship between the two main characters is fantastic!
This was a great chapter. The bit with minato was hot, and cute. The description of the baby was adorable. The bit with the baby was sweet. The bit with jijii throwing the paperweight out the window and mailing Naruto was funny. The ending was great! So please update soon! I want to read what happens!
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