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for New fight new life V2

by Zaara-the-Black

person biob
schedule June 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good job hope you update soon
schedule February 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update its a good story
person Wyrtha
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good pokenaruto story so far. Like the mix of legendary/mythical beasts in this story. Really looking forward to whom Naruto adds to his party next. The Kelpie was a nice add in, as was the Scythor (my favorite from the 1st season of pokemon), and a charmander has also been one of my favorites for some time. Perhaps a dog type next? Although I find most of the pokedogs lacking even Hounddoom based off one of my favorite rl dogs.

Anyway looking forward to your next chapter. Liked the stare down Naruto had at the end. Will be interesting to find out what that was all about in the future.
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON
schedule August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic chapter please continue
schedule August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
im glad the pokegirl verse hasnt been as abandonded as i thought, keep up the good work
person theoimpacientone
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great start