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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really nice story! good writing! can't wait till the next chapter!
I wish I had a way to know when is't coming....!!!!!!
gem
I wish I had a way to know when is't coming....!!!!!!
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February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome need some editing in general areas but awesome none the less please continue
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February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
............just want this story id # so i can add to my favs do u know it?
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May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story already!
can't wait for the update, keep up the good work ^^
can't wait for the update, keep up the good work ^^
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a new chepter!
Thanks a lot, i keep remembering your fic ocasionaly, but...well, i couldn't do anything to force you write more, so...
Naru and Sasu cuddling, so cute! >///<
Thanks a lot, i keep remembering your fic ocasionaly, but...well, i couldn't do anything to force you write more, so...
Naru and Sasu cuddling, so cute! >///<
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, i just read chapter one, sorry, the prologue....Interesting.
I see that says MPreg...so Sasuke is going to be the pregnant one? XD
That'll be different, can't wait to see!
I see that says MPreg...so Sasuke is going to be the pregnant one? XD
That'll be different, can't wait to see!
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you kill Kushina (well...Orochimaru did) and now Itachi wants to marry them...
What a twist in the history!
Hope to read the 5 chapter soon.
What a twist in the history!
Hope to read the 5 chapter soon.
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far the story seems to be quite peaceful, even the battle at the end seems to be a ritual. The hierarchy inside both packs is pretty the same too.
The most interesting point was the unusual amount of babies and the characters you've chosen to be siblings. We'll see how it works.
I'd recommend to use past instead of present as the story you're telling is a legend\fairy tale-like.
Should we expect some mysteries \ feuds \ black magic like curse etc.? Good luck with your writing!
The most interesting point was the unusual amount of babies and the characters you've chosen to be siblings. We'll see how it works.
I'd recommend to use past instead of present as the story you're telling is a legend\fairy tale-like.
Should we expect some mysteries \ feuds \ black magic like curse etc.? Good luck with your writing!