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person GZulu
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not to mention that Naruto's face is more like Kushina's.
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome story so far! I would like to point out a couple of things. One, Kushina's eyes were green, not purple, though the idea of her having purple eyes isn't a bad one. Two, Kushina had also been the Kyuubi's Jinchuriki (second one, first being the wife of the first Hokage, Mito Uzumaki). Sry to point them out if you already know about it... but yeah. >.> it's a habit of mine to try correct every mistake or seeming mistake i see. Love the story though, so I can't wait to read the next chapter XD
person JoshB
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story has a few chapters but I would like the chapters to be longer and maybe you could explain how Minato and Kushina came back in more detailed later on in the next upcoming chapters and what could this meeting be about.
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaaaay! maybe they can train the fan girl outta sakura and make sure sas doesn't become the dark dick he is in canon.
person smint45
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story has a really interesting start^^ I like the idea^^ Although I'm not so happy that naruto will get a het pairing (I normally only read M/M) I will have to endure that so I can continue to read this really interesting story!!! See you again soon!!!