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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it the way you did it! Keep it this way and submit it again slightly different with alternate chapters! Like call this one Betrayal, the do another version called Betrayal And Lies or something. I like this one and if you keep it this way I'll continue to read it! I don't care if they're more OC than that! The only one who can write a fiction like the real Itachi and Kisame would be the original writer, otherwise ALL fan fictions are OC! Even MINE are and I'm not afraid to admit it!!! Good luck!!!
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... been waiting for the update all day long, and it is worth a diamond to wait for it! I love it when Pip handled Sakura! Oh well, I don't mind the pairing just as long as Naruto is the uke. (*^-^*)V
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please bring back the story
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September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww... I hope you are feeling better now that the surgery is over. Take your time and get to living wholly once more; we can wait longer. If beta is needed, may I offer my aid? If one has already been found, good luck to you both. ^_^. Be safe and well.
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September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. As for pairing, as long as Naruto is seme I'll be good.
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September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If you still need a beta hit up my email in the review or just post up a chapter and i will put my email up for you.
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I vote Naruto/Shikamaru, then Shikamaru/Naruto, then Shikamaru/Kyuubi/Naruto. (if you will allow multiple agreements.) I really don't like Kisame/Naruto or Itachi/Naruto so I down vote that if possible.
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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HMPH! Serve them right! Well I think based on this chapter that means Tsunade and Jiraiya aren't bad, but I guess Naruto already felt betrayed so it's gonna hard to forgive them. Oh I still want Ita/Naru.
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice...very nice. I really love the back story on the three imbecile's actions. Can't wait to see what next; I understand about the waiting tho on the longer chapters. *sighs* maybe I can use the time to finish typing up the next chapter of my story....hmmmmm....have a great day and I will be waiting with breathe held.
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter!
I vote Itachi/Naruto
I vote Itachi/Naruto