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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can't wait 4 the next chapter. I like ItaNaru. So I guess I vote for that.
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really like the begining, though i would like to know more of the backstory, what happened, why did they betray him, who were there to tie him down, why didn't he fight back? ETC. Also I'd like to make a bid for a KisameNarutoItachi pairing, or a ShinoNaruto Pairing......I love both of those but not many do them and i'd like to see more.
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have seen a lot of variations on this story and almost all of them screw it up. So far all you have is an intro so it can still go both ways:
DO NOT go the "poor little Naruto"-route who sits and cries and gets stopped by a little seal while being abused.
Naruto is the strongest ninja on the show who also has access to both natural energy and Kyuubi's chakra There is no way in hell that a few seals designed for ordinary humans can hold him back. The next chapter better be about him effortlessly breaking out and getting revenge as the strongest ninja that is alive at the moment. And not about him being held back by "Tsunade's chakra". Shit he can overpower her chakra-reserves by himself and that's not even counting Kyuubi as back-up.
just watch the movie "Naruto: Blood Prison" that starts out similarly. It is established as canon that even with sealed-away chakra he can still access his sage-mode. There is no way he won't escape.
DO NOT go the "poor little Naruto"-route who sits and cries and gets stopped by a little seal while being abused.
Naruto is the strongest ninja on the show who also has access to both natural energy and Kyuubi's chakra There is no way in hell that a few seals designed for ordinary humans can hold him back. The next chapter better be about him effortlessly breaking out and getting revenge as the strongest ninja that is alive at the moment. And not about him being held back by "Tsunade's chakra". Shit he can overpower her chakra-reserves by himself and that's not even counting Kyuubi as back-up.
just watch the movie "Naruto: Blood Prison" that starts out similarly. It is established as canon that even with sealed-away chakra he can still access his sage-mode. There is no way he won't escape.
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where this goes. Also, may i suggest shikamaru for the other part of the pairing, we dont see much naruShika.