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I love this chapter, man. You made Tenten's feelings for Naruto and her 'sisters' quite belivable as she adjusts to her new life. Just like Naruto, being an orphan, she had no experience being with a family and now she is part of one, she definitely will not go back to her previous life, especially she now knows she is loved as well as feeling love toward the Naruto, Sakura, and Ino. :)

Just being a NaruTen fan, I'm disappointed you ended the chapter when Tenten was going to have sex with Naruto for the first time. Gee, you have to leave it there? I was hoping to read how that special moment. (sigh)

Anyway, I look forward to reading more of Tenten's lessons and her living with Naruto, Sakura, and Ino. I can already see that they'll be quite happy together. :)

Oh, BTW... Did you ever thought of having Naruto use his Kage Bushins during any of his sessions with any of his pets? I'm sure the girls will not mind getting 'gang bang' by their master. XD

I liek the chapter, but why did you change the point of view to first person?

Great! You added Tenten to become Naruto's third pet. I always love this kunoichi, for she was the first Konoha kunoichi of Naruto's age group in the series to take being a ninja seriously. A matter of fact, now that I think about it, her being a serious kunoichi to accept training to become strong does make her more acceptable to the slave lifestyle. She will obey and do so willingly in order to get stronger. It's in her nature, and I'm sure she will get stronger thanks to Naruto's training as well as along the way love him as Ino and Sakura does. :)

So I look forward to the next chapter and reading more of Tenten's training. :)

Ya know, I was rather into this story at first but my interest has completely waned. Maybe it's cause I don't really care for Sakura or maybe it's cause I'm not really that much into BDSM. I'm dominant but only so much so. So sorry, but I think I'm gonna stop reading this; I've simply lost interest.

still great! but I was wondering if you could do something with Kurenai.

love the fic

dude you are a god among literary geniuses. i love this story. it'd be nice to have more of anko and hinata.
maybe even her losing a bet to naruto and naruto getting carte blanche to have her in his dungeon for a few days.
i mean naruto ass fucking hinata is such a hot idea and doing it whilst she is in stocks just ups the hottness.
one other thing when sakura or ino next get into the "tentacle" room describe the place so far you've only said she gets to go there if she's a really good girl but not what the place is or what happens in there! the last thing would be i know you have tenten slated to be naruto's next slave and end his harem there but i think you should add hana inuzuka as well. maybe by her mother offering her because she knows that naruto can properly take care of her needs hehehe.

I really expeted a lot more of Tsume in this chapter then there was but other wise a great chapter can't wait for the next update.

Yay!!!!!! I was worried that you might not update again!!!!!!

W00T! Update! I loved the exposition, dude! Good work!