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for Chained to the Whirlpool-Reboot

by YamiNoKami

person Anon
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, I'm almost afraid to find out what happens next...

Keep up the good work!
person bugler18
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was great so far...any way u can email me when the next chapter is posted?
person Rosutsu
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow ...

this chapter was so goddamn hot ... please dont take as long as with the last update ^^ i almost thought you abonded the idea ...
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a get story can't wait to read more
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGG O.O I, I just don't know what to say. I had to keep reminding myself that they are 12 and not older. Well scared and waiting for the next chappy
person Draklin
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the Naruto/Sakura parts without ino, theirs not enough naruto/sakura parts. the lastest chapter was good it was mostly naru/saku, except for the first chapter it was my favorite so far.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing!
person KaelHyun
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter though i wish that you could include Ten-ten somehow...
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First let me say I agree about Sasuke, second it would be by my taste Sakura and Hinata with Naruto but that's just me but still.... YOU ROCK DUDE!!! I just read a few of the chapters and jalepano that was something HOT! Please update soon and I'm hoping that another girl might stumble in...cough Hin....cought ata...
person Rosutsu
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story ^^ cant exactly put a finger on the why yet ^^ but i think ill manage to figure it out when i read some more chapters ^^

please update soon ^^