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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eh...story doesn't have as much 'actual' sex in it then I would like. You focus way too much on the other kind of stuff it seems that's good for a bit but after awhile it just gets boring as I'm waiting for them to move past that thing.
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update! You have a wonderful story!
KaS
KaS
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vary cool cant wate to read more of this
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was some very hot BDSM. Ino's parents' reactions were not really believable, but that's to be expected in a mostly PWP. I truly enjoyed it. Though, I must admit that making them still 12 made it almost completely unbelievable, so I just substituted in my brain and ignored it. Other than those two realism things, I loved your sex scenes. So many people do them badly. Great work.
~AA666
~AA666
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell!! Those four chapters are almost too much to handle in one day! I have to say, this is some of the best work I've ever read. I would like to see a scene in this "tentacle room" in the future. I just want to know when your other story will be updated too...