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by Daydreamer79

person Deanna
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! Thank you so much for updating!
person TheHiddenAngel
schedule January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like the way this is going keep it up
person Lilly
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just a note to say that I am truly enjoying this story and look forward to more. Thank you so much for sharing your vision and talent.
person Lil-lo
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You balance the fantasy aspects well with "Naruto" story elements and characters, and while I have read a few stories with similar elements your story is unique and is its own tale. I love the bond and Sasuke's possessiveness, and I like that you made Kisame a dragon. Dragon is definitely > shark! So far I suspect Orochimaru is the foul party. I felt nervous that Fugaku didn't question Orochimaru over what stripped him of his power, and I suspect that Orochimaru has had time to recover, try to take the Uchiha's power and claim the rare feral he traded back. Kabuto being the healer doesn't help shake my theory. I'm even wondering if Mandara will play a role, or possibly be the big bad instead. Either way, Sasuke and Naruto are at a point where they will struggle unless they finally get into mating and I definitely want to see you continue. Please write more!
person spiffycaptainj
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just procrastinated my morning reading this! loooooooove! I had to stare in shock when I realized that there was no 'next chapter' link. I cannot wait to read more! this has been an excellent, well written, read.
person Kristin
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a really great story. I like the plot and character development of Sasuke and Naruto and their relationship. I think Fugaku is under Orochimaru's spell or something of the sort and he wants Naruto dead, but from breaking the Bond, and Sasuke greatly scarred and unable to be at his full magic, but I don't know why. Even if I'm wrong, I can't wait for you to update, this story is so different from the normal plots you see, I absolutely love it! Please update soon.
person Mari
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Was rather surprised to see this sudden update on AFF. Im loving it already, hope to see more of this story soon! =D
person satterb
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for clearing up the problem with Fugaku...well not clearing up exactly, but at least he's not become a terrible ass. After all, when Naruto first came along, he was willing to do anything for Sasuke. I will be waiting patiently for the next update, and to find out what happens next. I love your imagination! Thanks for all your hard work.
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5. Yes, I can tell something else is going on behind the scenes. And is it ever a good thing when one character is locked up in his laboratory for months?

Anyway, I look forward to seeing what is going to happen to Naruto and Sasuke next, so update soon, please.
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so upset right now I'm way to into this story! I'm waiting for the next chapter! I cried when I realized that was the end if the chapter.