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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! This is keeping me on the edge of my seat. I love it that I can't guess what's going to happen next and that this story's not a cookie-cutter plot. I can't wait to see the next update. Thanks for sharing.
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a perfect way for Naruto to mature and not hurt anyone that he loved. It was touching that Sasuke is so protective and possessive of Naruto and Naruto can't even see it. Also...thank you for not giving Naruto and Sasuke the usual banter with each of them denigrating the other. It's been played and it's not very conducive to romance. I like this Sasuke alot. Even though Naruto can't see it, Sasuke truly loves him. I look forward to more. And you can make this story as long as you like!
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
off to a most promising start. I hope Oro and kabu don't hold to their canon characters and go all traitor y. After all, it's not like Naru can leave him now.
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great plot..
pretty pls update soon :D
thx
pretty pls update soon :D
thx
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2. I am amazed by your creativity once again. I really enjoyed this chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I still like the story but i feel as though he fave in too quickly to being a guardian. But the story us progressing amazingly i hope you continue to update!
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Umm, the same chapter is up twice... But it is a great opening. I was getting shivers with your descriptions of how cold it was, lol. Looking forward to the next update.
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. I hope you update soon.
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this. I have always admired your fantasy stories. You've got a great talent for fantasy fiction. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with all of us.
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I was hoping there was a second chapter cause this was just too good. I wonder who took Orochimaru's powers away and what he is going to do with them now that he has got them back? Also how did he become in possession of the feral? There are just so many questions and I just can't wait till you update again
Ja ne keep up the good work
Ja ne keep up the good work