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by assassi

person Rowan
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sweet, hot and very wonderful. Well done!
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story! It is wonderful wonderful wonderful! I love how Genma noticed Raido and how much he wanted Raido. And I loved how you showed how much Raido needed Genma and was swept away by Genma's own need. If Genma hadn't shown how much he wanted Raido I don't think Raido would have been able to accept someone's interest in him yet.

Such an awesome story. Thanks so much for posting!
person Anise
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been ages since I've gotten to read this pairing, I was beginning to think they had been all but forgotten. I loved the history and backstory that you gave them - Genma was such a bossy little thing.^^ Although if he hadn't been the straightforward and to the point kind of guy I don't know if they ever would have gotten anywhere :) I also liked the vulnerability of Raidou, we're so used to seeing him as the confident guy he is now you forget what these kinds of injuries must do to all the shinobi.

Such a good story from the story to the smut, I loved reading it :D