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Well fuck me.
I have never been into these types of story's before but I had to know who it was Sasuke was torturing.
All in all this is a great story and I cant wait for the update

I spoiled myself and read the extended summary. XP But I'm glad though because I wouldn't have guessed from the first two chapters that the story was going to turn into something other than kink smut. I'm not so much interested in kink smut as I am all the psychological stuff that's going to go on in the rest of the fic. My first thought after reading the summary was that maybe the one who was tortured, raped, and humiliated when he was 17 wasn't Sasuke's best friend but Sasuke himself? Or if it didn't happen then, it must have happened earlier in his life.

It's interesting that what gets Sasuke off is Naruto's pain and he likes hitting him as much as he likes sexually humiliating him. When he does sexually humiliate him, does Sasuke ever rape him with his own member, or is it just foreign objects? I found it interesting that he found what he was doing to Naruto to be so arousing, yet he never sought his own release. It says something interesting about Sasuke if he's refusing to get involved with his victims in that particular way. Also, I think there wouldn't be any hope at all for Naruto to fall in love with Sasuke later on if he does cross that line. (Especially since Naruto has retained his defiance despite everything--no Stockholm syndrome here.)

My only piece of advice is that in your A/N you said that the torture is expected to go on for several more chapters. With everything else that's supposed to happen in this fic (and there's a lot), that doesn't seem very productive. By now, we've gotten a very clear picture of what kinds of things Sasuke has been doing to Naruto/his other victims. Don't know what we'd get out of seeing much more, except for the kink factor, of course. Unless you mean that Sasuke will be found out soon and the tables will turn and Naruto's torture of him will begin. That's OK then.

A creative beautifully twisted piece. I love it. And I hope it isn't over, because I would love to see more.

poor naruchan. when will twisted sasuke stop. i bet he was raped when he was a kid. that happens alot.

I'm looking forward to this one. I rearly really go into hardcore sadism, but I do dabble in it in some of my stories and I think this has the makings of one serious fucked up nosebleeder. Please continue.

wow. you just gave sasuke a whole new twistedness. and here i thought that he couldnt get more psycho. cant wait to read the chapter

Well torture/rape/darkfic isn't my cuppa, but since you say it won't be that and only that, I'll stick with it for a bit to see what happens next. :) Bad stuff for the sake of bad stuff is unpleasant and not erotic to me, but if there's a purpose for it and the fic uses it to make a point/build up to something else, then I don't mind it. :)

Fuck, I like it better now that I know it's Naruto (I thought he would be coming up as a second victim) than when I thought it was Killer Bee. ^_^