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March 26, 2020 at 12:00 AM
What great story telling! I appreciated the complexity and development of both Sasuke and Kakashi's characters in this story and would love to find out what happens next! Wauting for your update!
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October 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I'm excited to see more updates doo .
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October 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! Definitely a lot more plot than I was expecting but I enjoyed it a lot
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May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I always look out for updates to this story and I always enjoy reading them. I appreciate this Sasuke and this Kakashi, including how complex and consistent they are.
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May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I followed your advice and waited until evening ^^ With this kind of bedtime story I'll have really sweet dreams ;)
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May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing update. I'm so happy that Sasuke's team support him (even though one of them is helplessly in lust with him and actually asked Kakashi if he would do a threesome!) and that Naruto and Yamato, even Ino, are willing to stand by them. I'm so mad at Sakura. It will be interesting what you end up putting her through.
I loved the conversation regarding what their parents/family would think of this relationship. I think the clan would follow their Head, driven by fear of repercussions. Mikoto would side with her husband on the outside, but sneak food and things to her baby behind Fugaku's back. Itachi would be his own person and love his brother unconditionally. Heck, he might even swing that way as well and have a wife on the side to bear his offspring!
We don't know much about Sakumo, but I think he'd be happy as long as his only son was happy.
Anyway, thanks for the update. My muse went on vacation after that wellspring of writing. I hope she returns soon so I can work on Strength In Numbers ^-^
I loved the conversation regarding what their parents/family would think of this relationship. I think the clan would follow their Head, driven by fear of repercussions. Mikoto would side with her husband on the outside, but sneak food and things to her baby behind Fugaku's back. Itachi would be his own person and love his brother unconditionally. Heck, he might even swing that way as well and have a wife on the side to bear his offspring!
We don't know much about Sakumo, but I think he'd be happy as long as his only son was happy.
Anyway, thanks for the update. My muse went on vacation after that wellspring of writing. I hope she returns soon so I can work on Strength In Numbers ^-^
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I've been waiting long time for this chapter but it was definitely worth it :) and that sex scene... hot! I regret I didn't wait untill evening to read it ;)
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February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow-oh-wow, there's a lot going on in this chapter.
First, I have to believe that Gai is sporting a massive lust for Kakashi. For someone who is going out of his way to plant mistrust regarding Sasuke in Kakashi's heart (hello! Kakashi is Gai's eternal rival!), I have to believe Gai wants to hurt Kakashi in retaliation. If they were truly friends, I think Gai would have been more honest with him. Besides, what happened to "Eternal Youth?" and all that nonsense?
And what Gai did to Sakura? Even though he planted the seeds, all she had to do was see for herself what Kakashi and Sasuke had become. I was actually very disappointed in her actions - going to Ino and spreading the rumor about the relationship between the men. Granted, she's hurt and angry, but a better person who is supposed to be your friend, would bring it up to that person in question. Okay, I'll get off of the soapbox now.
Kakashi not telling Sasuke where the rumor seems to originate from is going to bite him in the ass (no pun intended). I understand why Kakashi didn't want to tell him, but honesty is the best policy. On top of that, I think that the entire Team 7 needs to have a sit down with a mediator (Tsunade) and deal with their issues. I know Naruto has reluctantly accepted the situation, but this thing with Sakura needs to be dealt with.
All in all, this was a really awesome chapter. I loved the interaction with Teuchi and him wanting to know who the Seme is in the relationship (Kakashi's response was priceless - Sasuke would kill me-LOL)
Whew! Long review this time. I look forward to your next update. I wish this site had update notifications. I have to set them up in FF .net so I can read and review here. Well, I do what I have to to get my Yaoi fix!
First, I have to believe that Gai is sporting a massive lust for Kakashi. For someone who is going out of his way to plant mistrust regarding Sasuke in Kakashi's heart (hello! Kakashi is Gai's eternal rival!), I have to believe Gai wants to hurt Kakashi in retaliation. If they were truly friends, I think Gai would have been more honest with him. Besides, what happened to "Eternal Youth?" and all that nonsense?
And what Gai did to Sakura? Even though he planted the seeds, all she had to do was see for herself what Kakashi and Sasuke had become. I was actually very disappointed in her actions - going to Ino and spreading the rumor about the relationship between the men. Granted, she's hurt and angry, but a better person who is supposed to be your friend, would bring it up to that person in question. Okay, I'll get off of the soapbox now.
Kakashi not telling Sasuke where the rumor seems to originate from is going to bite him in the ass (no pun intended). I understand why Kakashi didn't want to tell him, but honesty is the best policy. On top of that, I think that the entire Team 7 needs to have a sit down with a mediator (Tsunade) and deal with their issues. I know Naruto has reluctantly accepted the situation, but this thing with Sakura needs to be dealt with.
All in all, this was a really awesome chapter. I loved the interaction with Teuchi and him wanting to know who the Seme is in the relationship (Kakashi's response was priceless - Sasuke would kill me-LOL)
Whew! Long review this time. I look forward to your next update. I wish this site had update notifications. I have to set them up in FF .net so I can read and review here. Well, I do what I have to to get my Yaoi fix!
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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'd like to know where Sasuke got his dirty mouth, too Kakashi. What a little slut the raven is, but you love it, don't you?
Another wonderful update and thank you so much for your endorsement of my fictions! It makes my heart all warm and fuzzy. Now, if I could just get my muse to work for me so I could update them like you asked. *sigh* so difficult.
Another wonderful update and thank you so much for your endorsement of my fictions! It makes my heart all warm and fuzzy. Now, if I could just get my muse to work for me so I could update them like you asked. *sigh* so difficult.
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big NaruSasu fan, if I must tear them apart it would be NaruGaara and Sasu dead (cause they're so inseparable) or OroSasu. I guess KakaSasu is ok but I don't particularly like this pairing (GaaraSasu even more!) so it's a bigger complement that I still love your story. You keep it interesting to read, I can't wait to find out what's in next chapters. I miss Naruto a bit, the boy makes the manga and yet he's left out and almost not existing in your story, but I guess you can't have all :) There are some hints of NaruHina, the pairing I truly, truly resent :P but one of writers privileges is to decide :) Hoping to read more soon! :) ps. nice touch with Gai, I also like that you're not making Konoha San Francisco ;) (not everyone has to be openly gay and gay-friendly)