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One thing I have to add: there are some dirty talks that mention "inseminate me" or something like that, I hope you aren't planning to actually impregnate Sasuke cause I just couldn't bare it, when I see "mpreg" I skip the story right away, the idea of Sasu or Naru pregnant is simply idiotic for me

Poor Gaara! I'm so glad he only pushed things with Sasuke a little. Maybe he will find a love like Sasuke and Kakashi in a companion story? I'm loving this story so far. Sorry i really suck at reviews.

Ok this is me VampireDoll666 from fanfiction, for some reason the server is down and no reviews or anything else can be done on that site I tried so I am reviewing here for chapter 8. Oh and didn't you see my review for chapter 7, it's there...did it the same day you posted. Anyway on to the review...what I want to know is what is up with Gai, I mean he's trying to start trouble with Raido and Kashi. I mean he says that Raido is with some young girl which turns out to be not true and then he keeps bring up what Sasuke did. Now you know as well as anyone how I don't like Sasuke very much, but even I can see he's trying to make it up in his own way at least when it pertains to Kakashi. I mean man lay off with all of the past shit Gai, and find yourself a woman or a man whichever the case may be. I'm glad that the ninken are taking to Sasuke, even more glad that they are staying with Kashi. Ok that is it, once I am able to post a review on the other site I may just copy and paste this there unless I think of something else I wanted to comment on this chapter for.

Nice long chapter to get us back into this story. I enjoy your sweeter versions of Kakashi and Sasuke, even though your bad ass Sasuke is more true to his actual nature. I like to read on Archive of Our Own and reviews are almost nonexsistant over there.

So much going on in this chapter, but it really flowed well.
I had to feel bad for Gaara for his unrequited love, but in the end he made the right decision. I'm actually proud of Sasuke's growth and Kakashi's strength in denying his attraction to the seduction. It was hard for him to say no, but he did good.

Excellent update!

Absolutely wonderful read!

I think this is a great story, and all I have to say is: Poor Kakashi! You really love to beat on him as much as I beat on Naruto. (This is my third attempt to write this, I hope you get it.)

Wonderful story! Really tugs at the heart.

Yay! I want to see where this is going :)

Aww, so sad! Angsty stuff like this makes me cry, but I read it anyways because it's so good. I love all of your stories, can't wait to read more of any of them! :D