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by RyalsShoal

person kit
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! there is a lot of humor which I really enjoy.
I liked when Iruka stated in his mind that there is a 'little strain' in the hatake family and then Kakashi declared that they could all rot in hell. haha cant wait to read some more!
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is written soooo well!! I can't wait for the next chapter and will thoroughly enjoy Iruka's torment and Kakashi being a cheeky bastard haha
person lo
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good set up, well written; this seems like it will be quite interesting.
person awesome
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was ahmazing. Its got me all excited to see what happens next. And how Kakashi is feeling about all this.
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, ouch. sucks to be you Iruka... still, hows that going to work with two guys... unless this is m preg?
person criss_cross
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is so ... I don't know, effervescent?!! It amuses me greatly, and I am waiting for a next chapter. (If I did remember well, I read the beginning of this story some time ago). Well done!!
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am very very interested in seeing where this leads and just how much of a bitch she is going to be.
Please keep this up :D